Wrapped In His Arms
God's Love51 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
What an uplifting, spiritual read this was, it flowed beautifully with lovely rhythm and wonderful rhymes throughout.
I particularly enjoyed the last stanza which completed this excellent write so very well.
Mitchell.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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What an uplifting, spiritual read this was, it flowed beautifully with lovely rhythm and wonderful rhymes throughout.
I particularly enjoyed the last stanza which completed this excellent write so very well.
Mitchell.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you Mitchell for your kind words and encouragement .
blessings
Janet
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a very well written poem. It's full of hope. You show real insight. our poem is inspiring. The truths you express are a comfort to many. Thank you for sharing your faith.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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This is a very well written poem. It's full of hope. You show real insight. our poem is inspiring. The truths you express are a comfort to many. Thank you for sharing your faith.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you Thomas for your kind words and encouragement .
blessings
Janet
Comment from jaded831
Excellent, I could not find one flaw in your poem. Reading your words gave me a warm feeling inside, and I felt closer to God. I can picture each stanza and could relate. Great job.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Excellent, I could not find one flaw in your poem. Reading your words gave me a warm feeling inside, and I felt closer to God. I can picture each stanza and could relate. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you for your kind words and encouragement and those shiny six stars.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Fridayauthor
This is a beautiful poem written with obvious feeling. There is a nice flow of simple words that move nicely to a strong ending.
Very well done contest entry. Good luck with it.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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This is a beautiful poem written with obvious feeling. There is a nice flow of simple words that move nicely to a strong ending.
Very well done contest entry. Good luck with it.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you for your kind words and encouragement and good luck wishes. I did win and I'm so pleased. I don't usually win these things.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
His grace sufficient for the day --
with love that time transcends.
I feel his saving grace each day --
A love that never ends.
A child upon her daddy's lap
free from the day's alarms.
I cuddle up and say my prayers
wrapped in my Father's arms.
So stunningly written...so emotive....God comes through strongly in this brilliant write so beautiful love and best wishes Meia x
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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His grace sufficient for the day --
with love that time transcends.
I feel his saving grace each day --
A love that never ends.
A child upon her daddy's lap
free from the day's alarms.
I cuddle up and say my prayers
wrapped in my Father's arms.
So stunningly written...so emotive....God comes through strongly in this brilliant write so beautiful love and best wishes Meia x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you Meia for your kind words and encouragement and good luck wishes. I did win and I'm so pleased. I don't usually win these things.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Marykelly
The strength of this poem to me is the simplicity of the quatrains and the complexity of the message. The rhyming quatrains move the words along quickly and effortlessly, but those words tell a profound story of faith in God the Father, especially when the earthly father is not someone to count on.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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The strength of this poem to me is the simplicity of the quatrains and the complexity of the message. The rhyming quatrains move the words along quickly and effortlessly, but those words tell a profound story of faith in God the Father, especially when the earthly father is not someone to count on.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from c_lucas
Security is a key factor of surviving. One's beliefs is the corner stone of one's life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a wonderful read.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Security is a key factor of surviving. One's beliefs is the corner stone of one's life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a wonderful read.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you Charlie for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about God and His mercy, freely given to us. He is akways looking out for His children and comfort us in every need.
Typo picked up
God came and held my trembling (my) hand
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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A very well-written poem about God and His mercy, freely given to us. He is akways looking out for His children and comfort us in every need.
Typo picked up
God came and held my trembling (my) hand
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you Sandra for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Thank you too for finding my extra word. I appreciate your kind correction.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dean Kuch
Just as an earthly father loves, cares for, and protects his children, so does our Heavenly Father love, watch over, and protect us as well.
A parent's love is unconditional. If not, it should be.
God's love for us is unconditional too and comes with no strings attached.
Parents care about what their children are doing, where they are going in life.
So does our Father in Paradise care about where we are heading.
Yours is a well rhymed poem featuring a valuable and important message.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Just as an earthly father loves, cares for, and protects his children, so does our Heavenly Father love, watch over, and protect us as well.
A parent's love is unconditional. If not, it should be.
God's love for us is unconditional too and comes with no strings attached.
Parents care about what their children are doing, where they are going in life.
So does our Father in Paradise care about where we are heading.
Yours is a well rhymed poem featuring a valuable and important message.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you Dean for your thoughtful and encouraging review. A parents love should be unconditional but thankfully, even if it isn't, our Heavenly Father's love is always there. Thanks for reading - hope you're having a good day.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Charmisa Parker
A really powerful, insightful, and motivational poem about the strength and beauty of God's love. We sometimes do forget that God understands our pain, which I believe is the reason why we have a hard time resting... Good job! Nice design and keep up the good work!
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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A really powerful, insightful, and motivational poem about the strength and beauty of God's love. We sometimes do forget that God understands our pain, which I believe is the reason why we have a hard time resting... Good job! Nice design and keep up the good work!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you Charmisa for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome!
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You are very welcome!
