Day Two Day?
My thoughts on Jay.17 total reviews
Comment from BOO ghost
That had feeling in it. Surely he will love this poem. Makes me reflect upon my life, I too got wee ones which I never met, but someday wil see them all because Jesus is the Lord, son of god, died for our sins - so many are atheists these days, lost, and do not know it. Not many Christians that believe anymore like used to be... see this poem brought out the spiritual side of me and I do not even go to church but I do believe and never stopped believing and watch on TV. BOO is out of nuggets, 5 out of 5 ain't bad. BOO!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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That had feeling in it. Surely he will love this poem. Makes me reflect upon my life, I too got wee ones which I never met, but someday wil see them all because Jesus is the Lord, son of god, died for our sins - so many are atheists these days, lost, and do not know it. Not many Christians that believe anymore like used to be... see this poem brought out the spiritual side of me and I do not even go to church but I do believe and never stopped believing and watch on TV. BOO is out of nuggets, 5 out of 5 ain't bad. BOO!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thanks Boo and cool name!
Loss of a child...
Horrid ...
'Like swallowing a dose of 'Hemlock Tea' each and every day...
Ricky1024.
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Oh, sad, you lost a child. Keep up your good spirits. There are angels and they listen when you lest expect. Cheers bro and I will be a good ghost. I understand your sorrows which is probably unfathomable to understand unless you lost a child. I hope you find happiness and relief from the daily sorrows. BOO can usually tell good guys from bad and you are a good guy. BOO!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm happy you have God and His Son back in your life, I'm pleased you have lost the anger that eats you up, and I'm happy you can, at last, celebrate your precious son's life. I'm still so very sorry you had to lose your son the way you did, that will always touch you with sadness, but you have found your way again. Your dedication to your son is just beautiful. I wish the rest of your life be filled with love and contentment, my friend. God bless you. Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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I'm happy you have God and His Son back in your life, I'm pleased you have lost the anger that eats you up, and I'm happy you can, at last, celebrate your precious son's life. I'm still so very sorry you had to lose your son the way you did, that will always touch you with sadness, but you have found your way again. Your dedication to your son is just beautiful. I wish the rest of your life be filled with love and contentment, my friend. God bless you. Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thanks Sandra,
Anger will consume and surround you and take you...
I had no hate just 'Whys?"
my wife and one daughter went down that road...
Dana did 2 years of her life incarcerated for dealing with her boyfriend
Joe Rodreguise.
{Deceased}
She is a mother and changed today or I would have lost two
Thanks,
Ricky...
Comment from emptypage
Ricky, your tender remembrances break my heart. I know your heart is broken. Do you think it will ever heal? I'm curious. I mean, we've all lost someone... I don't have any fresh deaths on my mind, except dogs I loved as family... I wonder if you believe it will ever get better.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Ricky, your tender remembrances break my heart. I know your heart is broken. Do you think it will ever heal? I'm curious. I mean, we've all lost someone... I don't have any fresh deaths on my mind, except dogs I loved as family... I wonder if you believe it will ever get better.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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my wife Carolyn had an operation at age 17.
For an appendicitis.
They messed up her flopian tubes. Never meant to have a child.
That is the answer to your question. Read me...
Touch Me...
Learn from my pain...
Ricky...
Comment from l.raven
Hi Ricky, this just broke my heart my sweet friend...I finally realize why there are only one set of footsteps in the sand...he's right here Ricky...so sad...but very well written...and your picture...what a beautiful boy...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Hi Ricky, this just broke my heart my sweet friend...I finally realize why there are only one set of footsteps in the sand...he's right here Ricky...so sad...but very well written...and your picture...what a beautiful boy...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thanks Linda. At only 18 Jason had the world in his hands but He must have known to much. my wife's gambling problems. Her severe depression.
She was insane.
The house.
Almost lost that for back taxes.
Ten years of Bills turned upside down and stashed in her dresser...
It goes on and on...
$100,00.00 in debt with credit cards...
I forgave her for she gave me three kids but I don't miss her for
killing herself by stopping her meds.
I miss him...
Ricky...
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I'm so sorry Ricky...and you are always welcome...xxoo he is with you...love
Comment from JDRBAR
This flowed a little better even though there is no rhyme or reason to sentence structure. Why, may I ask, do you post your chapters in the prose section rather than the poetry section?
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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This flowed a little better even though there is no rhyme or reason to sentence structure. Why, may I ask, do you post your chapters in the prose section rather than the poetry section?
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Why do you diss-honor my Son's work with four stars?
Ricky1024.
And, I dissagree for my reviews brought tears...
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I truly don't believe I dishonored your work. It is an author's job to please the reader. It is not the reader's job to please the author. Not every reader is going view a piece the same way. I'm sorry if you are offended.
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miss cookie replied
My heart goes out for the loss of your son at such a young age.
Dianne was 41 years young she died from a brain tumor.
I sure they are the best friend for they are a perfect match, both caring and giving people.
Have a blessed day.
Cookie
A six star review reply from my reply.
And no problem.
I don't take away unless it is horrid to teach.
Ricky1024.
my problem is the sensitive issues involved with these "Gift of Life" pieces.
I am a representative.
for the Philadelphia, branch on Vine Street.
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I am so sorry, but I have no idea of what you are talking about.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate.
It's been a while since I've been on here, sorry about that.
This is a powerful piece and well worth posting. You must have quite a collection by now.
Well done.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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G'day mate.
It's been a while since I've been on here, sorry about that.
This is a powerful piece and well worth posting. You must have quite a collection by now.
Well done.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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650 written and partially written books.
About a hundred on here.
Thanks again my friend,
Ricky1024
Comment from smbau
This reminds me of the poem "The Footprints in the Sand." The poet writes about Jay who is missed and in a the spiritual realm. Thus the following statements
""I once carried Thee at only the age of three...
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"But now Jay, I need you this day... "
Like the flow and arrangement of content. The poem ends on a sad tone, yet overall the poem is hopeful. Great mix of emotions.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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This reminds me of the poem "The Footprints in the Sand." The poet writes about Jay who is missed and in a the spiritual realm. Thus the following statements
""I once carried Thee at only the age of three...
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"But now Jay, I need you this day... "
Like the flow and arrangement of content. The poem ends on a sad tone, yet overall the poem is hopeful. Great mix of emotions.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thanks smbau.
A fine review and the footprint thing about Christ
was where I got the idea for this from.
Ricky1024.
Comment from c_lucas
One set of footprints in the sand. Jesus is carrying you. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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One set of footprints in the sand. Jesus is carrying you. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Jesus?
Got to honor him today!
This was one of my better pieces...
Struck from the broken Heart...
Of a father to a Son whom gave his away..
Ricky Educating and amazing the choir...
As you say...
Here at 'Fanstory.'.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend I really enjoyed reading the spiritual story you tell this story very well I like the content and the flow is great throughout I find this to be very interesting thank you so much for sharing this God bless you love la la
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Hello friend I really enjoyed reading the spiritual story you tell this story very well I like the content and the flow is great throughout I find this to be very interesting thank you so much for sharing this God bless you love la la
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thanks Dear.
I have two movies in the works
I will start presenting them soon.
One for Disney and the other about Oz.
Ricky...
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Ricky, I am reading this poem as free verse with some rhyme on missing Jay. Not knowing the circumstances, I am just going on the assumption of missing Jay and pray that all is well. Your spiritual poem focuses on the footprints, which is always a touching thing to remember. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Hi Ricky, I am reading this poem as free verse with some rhyme on missing Jay. Not knowing the circumstances, I am just going on the assumption of missing Jay and pray that all is well. Your spiritual poem focuses on the footprints, which is always a touching thing to remember. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Jay is an Organ donor existing today above in three people.
Thanks dear, your a doll.
Ricky1024.
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Hi Ricky. OMGoodness, through Jay others have found life. That's remarkable. That knowledge adds another dimension to your poem. Marilyn
