Somewhenever, Time and Time Again
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written yes we live then we die but what is to follow no one truly knows live life to the full have no regrets and long may it continue well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Hello my friend this is well written yes we live then we die but what is to follow no one truly knows live life to the full have no regrets and long may it continue well done regards Jill
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from dragonpoet
It seems this spiritual/philosophical poem tells us the yesterday and tomorrow aren't important. Today and what we do with it is the most important ways to use our gifts to change things for the better. I guess we all try to do that with our poems.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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It seems this spiritual/philosophical poem tells us the yesterday and tomorrow aren't important. Today and what we do with it is the most important ways to use our gifts to change things for the better. I guess we all try to do that with our poems.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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You're welcome. I feel the same about the reviews I receive.
Joan
Comment from jusylee72
this is a very thoughtful and heartfelt poem full of wonderful ideas and reality. My favorite line is Let your spirit roar. That is such a wonderful way to describe what we need to be and do in life.
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this is a very thoughtful and heartfelt poem full of wonderful ideas and reality. My favorite line is Let your spirit roar. That is such a wonderful way to describe what we need to be and do in life.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from brooke harrison
hi badger_29,
what a fantastic poem! it truly is insightful in its own way. i especially love the ending with the series of couplets.
what a great job!
all the best - brooke
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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hi badger_29,
what a fantastic poem! it truly is insightful in its own way. i especially love the ending with the series of couplets.
what a great job!
all the best - brooke
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a great poem, interesting and mature. I love the words you have invented, especially somewherever. The presentation is also very good.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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This is a great poem, interesting and mature. I love the words you have invented, especially somewherever. The presentation is also very good.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from oliver818
I enjyyoie poem. It has good imagery, rhyme and flow. I particularly enjoyed the way you simplified it all at the end down to single words. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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I enjyyoie poem. It has good imagery, rhyme and flow. I particularly enjoyed the way you simplified it all at the end down to single words. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought provoking free verse poem. Nothing is permanent in this life. The past became a memory and the future became a wish. Now is a free present.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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A very well-written thought provoking free verse poem. Nothing is permanent in this life. The past became a memory and the future became a wish. Now is a free present.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from c_lucas
Time
Man made
Youth
A start
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Time is thought to be the passing of dreams, instead of schemes. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making a very good read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Time
Man made
Youth
A start
***
Time is thought to be the passing of dreams, instead of schemes. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making a very good read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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My pleasure, BB.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a profound piece of poetry dear badger! the philosophical sentiment is absolutely outstanding! i love your metaphors and wording, both close to genius.
thank you fro sharing!
virtual six!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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this is a profound piece of poetry dear badger! the philosophical sentiment is absolutely outstanding! i love your metaphors and wording, both close to genius.
thank you fro sharing!
virtual six!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
You have a unique way of experimenting with words Brother which sets you apart.
This is a wonderful spiritual poem.
Which describes the scene with such imagery.
The alliteration is fantastic which strengthens your words
and an amazing picture to accompany
Mitchell
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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You have a unique way of experimenting with words Brother which sets you apart.
This is a wonderful spiritual poem.
Which describes the scene with such imagery.
The alliteration is fantastic which strengthens your words
and an amazing picture to accompany
Mitchell
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
