Somewhenever, Time and Time Again
Freeverse: spiritual43 total reviews
Comment from WintyBoy
If I get into something, and it holds my attention, like a bucket of water that doesn't leak, then I want to know why it doesn't leak.
Of course it doesn't leak, because there are no holes in it. "Sound!"
It is free, unencumbered by academia, refreshing, and hopeful.
I detect openness with a sense of humour, and good balance,
I also like your experimental approach, and yet holding a firm stance. Your arrangement was interesting, with some artistry.
Incidentally do you know of the uncertainty principle? I have gone
far and wide in my 70yrs, searching for the universal truth of everything, and nothingness. Finally, and at last, after all these years, I have the answer. The universe was created in my Aunt Fannies womb, so she tells me, and who am I to doubt it.
Even though she's a bit puddled, she's great company. But to be serious young Badge, for a moment, I have indeed made one or two interesting additions, that I'm proud of: Later! Winty.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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If I get into something, and it holds my attention, like a bucket of water that doesn't leak, then I want to know why it doesn't leak.
Of course it doesn't leak, because there are no holes in it. "Sound!"
It is free, unencumbered by academia, refreshing, and hopeful.
I detect openness with a sense of humour, and good balance,
I also like your experimental approach, and yet holding a firm stance. Your arrangement was interesting, with some artistry.
Incidentally do you know of the uncertainty principle? I have gone
far and wide in my 70yrs, searching for the universal truth of everything, and nothingness. Finally, and at last, after all these years, I have the answer. The universe was created in my Aunt Fannies womb, so she tells me, and who am I to doubt it.
Even though she's a bit puddled, she's great company. But to be serious young Badge, for a moment, I have indeed made one or two interesting additions, that I'm proud of: Later! Winty.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Hey WintyBoy, I am very grateful for your in-depth review, and warm comments. Yes, I am familiar with the uncertainty principle, it seems like some force at work; similar to "Murphy's law".
Sorry for taking bit to reply, I have been putting in a lot of hours at work. This was a real kind surprise review; and you brightened my day. Thanks!
Blessing,
Brother Badger
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Hello Badge, just switched on, and up you pop.
Work! I had a shock when I reached retirement, as I found myself with the freedom to be in the way, so I ended up being ushered to the shed at the bottom of the garden. My domain--work! I've never worked so hard in my life--morning to night. For no pay. It's hard to do nothing, if you're not used to it. On top of that I'm not allowed to interfere with anything in (HER) house, without permission,
unless of course something needs fixing, like now!
And also, if anything goes wrong, it was my fault.
I think I might have to strangle her, or something.
Yep! Good material for a poem that.
What do you think Badge? Only you can save her now......Let me know, cheers, Winty.
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I do not think that it is completely accurate to say that there is no reward for your work, as we all reap what we sow. Whenever I am confronted with any seemingly overwhelming or insurmountable situation, I ask Him for help, and He has NEVER failed. Although, sometimes it does take a bit-o-patience . . . Badger~
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You are an integrally connected part of my life; I am grateful to know you here in this creative space~
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Knowing more,
feeling less.
Through the door,
into somenothingness . . .
~Let your spirit roar!~
into the great beyond
where obscure secrets are told, and
the inhabitants are fond
of their spiritual fold.
Floating
aboding.
Hiding,
abiding.
Seeing,
being,
free~ a stunning spiritual rhythmic poem very well done my friend kindest regards,meia x
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Knowing more,
feeling less.
Through the door,
into somenothingness . . .
~Let your spirit roar!~
into the great beyond
where obscure secrets are told, and
the inhabitants are fond
of their spiritual fold.
Floating
aboding.
Hiding,
abiding.
Seeing,
being,
free~ a stunning spiritual rhythmic poem very well done my friend kindest regards,meia x
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I am truly honored by your kind words. A lot of this previous free-verse poetry has been very experimental for me. I had know idea when I was writing this, that it would turn out to be one of my best.
Warmest regards,
Brother Badger
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written spiritual poem. I think that the message is very clear and powerful and I can feel a lot of emotions. Nice rhyming scheme throughout with great alliteration. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lala
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Hello my friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written spiritual poem. I think that the message is very clear and powerful and I can feel a lot of emotions. Nice rhyming scheme throughout with great alliteration. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lala
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I am truly honored by your kind words. A lot of this previous free-verse poetry has been very experimental for me. I had know idea when I was writing this, that it would turn out to be one of my best.
Warmest regards,
Brother Badger
Comment from estory
Lots of great poetry on the site today, and this is one of them. I loved these hip hop rhythms, "to approach reality, with apathy; what will be will be" and all these fragments at the end "Floating, aboding, hiding, abiding; Seeing, being, freeing" I thought the ending was real strong, the poem kind of floated off like a balloon, into the sky. I loved that effect, use it a lot in my own poetry. I thought this poem had great rhythm, maybe it could have used an image or two, but the poem was strong estory
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Lots of great poetry on the site today, and this is one of them. I loved these hip hop rhythms, "to approach reality, with apathy; what will be will be" and all these fragments at the end "Floating, aboding, hiding, abiding; Seeing, being, freeing" I thought the ending was real strong, the poem kind of floated off like a balloon, into the sky. I loved that effect, use it a lot in my own poetry. I thought this poem had great rhythm, maybe it could have used an image or two, but the poem was strong estory
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I am truly honored by your kind words. A lot of this previous free-verse poetry has been very experimental for me. I had know idea when I was writing this, that it would turn out to be one of my best.
Warmest regards,
Brother Badger
Comment from smileycloud
It is good to remember who and what we are
where we come from where we are going
it is fine to live to the fullest of our human ability but it is even finer to see past it all
enjoyment of the best of our talents
gratefulness if we do not suffer too much
never forgetting that when the last door opens to close behind us;
He will call us His child
we will not look feel or see anything as we know it now
have a smiley day
I enjoyed your poem a great deal
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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It is good to remember who and what we are
where we come from where we are going
it is fine to live to the fullest of our human ability but it is even finer to see past it all
enjoyment of the best of our talents
gratefulness if we do not suffer too much
never forgetting that when the last door opens to close behind us;
He will call us His child
we will not look feel or see anything as we know it now
have a smiley day
I enjoyed your poem a great deal
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I am truly honored by your kind words. A lot of this previous free-verse poetry has been very experimental for me. I had know idea when I was writing this, that it would turn out to be one of my best.
Warmest regards,
Brother Badger
Comment from robina1978
Great artwork that complements your philosophical poem perfectly. I enjoyed the way you write. especially the last 7 lines. Sorry, just ran out of sixes.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Great artwork that complements your philosophical poem perfectly. I enjoyed the way you write. especially the last 7 lines. Sorry, just ran out of sixes.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I am truly honored by your kind words. A lot of this previous free-verse poetry has been very experimental for me. I had know idea when I was writing this, that it would turn out to be one of my best.
Warmest regards,
Brother Badger
Comment from frierajac
I like your poem very much as it speaks to me of intuitive knowledge and also
may purport to be a guide to the Great Beyond..an Acceptance of getting on with
life that is passing so quickly.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I like your poem very much as it speaks to me of intuitive knowledge and also
may purport to be a guide to the Great Beyond..an Acceptance of getting on with
life that is passing so quickly.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I am truly honored by your kind words. A lot of this previous free-verse poetry has been very experimental for me. I had know idea when I was writing this, that it would turn out to be one of my best.
Warmest regards,
Brother Badger
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are creative, interesting and thought provoking.
The reader especially liked the stanza that says "Let your gift unfold and you will see:". The poem flows and connects well. This was also a sense of deep
spirituality connected to this poem. The artwork compliments both the theme and
words of this poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are creative, interesting and thought provoking.
The reader especially liked the stanza that says "Let your gift unfold and you will see:". The poem flows and connects well. This was also a sense of deep
spirituality connected to this poem. The artwork compliments both the theme and
words of this poem.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger~
Comment from mermaids
This poem has a strong musical feel and flow to your use of words. I like the verse" floating, aboding, hiding, abiding". The one word lines add to the strength and feel of the poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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This poem has a strong musical feel and flow to your use of words. I like the verse" floating, aboding, hiding, abiding". The one word lines add to the strength and feel of the poem.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger ~
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Hello Badger:
Great thought provoking poem you've created here. You know the essential lesson I've learned in life is to treasure the magnificent being that you are and recognize first and foremost you're not here as a human being only. You're a spiritual being having a human experience.
All the best...
Bill~
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Hello Badger:
Great thought provoking poem you've created here. You know the essential lesson I've learned in life is to treasure the magnificent being that you are and recognize first and foremost you're not here as a human being only. You're a spiritual being having a human experience.
All the best...
Bill~
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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Thank-you for the insightful and descriptive comments. It is through the eyes of my reviewers that I am able to more fully understand a lot of the hidden meanings behind my writing; and realize exactly how it is being perceived.
I really appreciate your continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger~
