Rainbows (Tableau Poem)
contest entry-rainbows66 total reviews
Comment from Natalie Walker
This is a nice poem. Rainbows are one of my favorite things that happen in nature. Your imagery describes the beauty of rainbows very well.
I didn't notice any errors or typos, though the bright font on the bright background was a little hard to read.
Nice work!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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This is a nice poem. Rainbows are one of my favorite things that happen in nature. Your imagery describes the beauty of rainbows very well.
I didn't notice any errors or typos, though the bright font on the bright background was a little hard to read.
Nice work!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Natalie.
Comment from Pantygynt
Strange how they come in pairs. Unusual to get two almost as bright as each other but a stunning photo to accompany your contest entry. I rather like unpunctuated poetry it allows the reader several different interpretations of the poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Strange how they come in pairs. Unusual to get two almost as bright as each other but a stunning photo to accompany your contest entry. I rather like unpunctuated poetry it allows the reader several different interpretations of the poem.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend, I do appreciate it.
Comment from Rasmine
Beautiful poem. I couldn't really read it carefully because of the colors. They kind of blended to cause a glaring effect. I have epilepsy and couldn't concentrate. Others may have light sensitivity and may have the same thing.
What I did read, was beautiful. :) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Beautiful poem. I couldn't really read it carefully because of the colors. They kind of blended to cause a glaring effect. I have epilepsy and couldn't concentrate. Others may have light sensitivity and may have the same thing.
What I did read, was beautiful. :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much. Rasmine, I appreciate it.
Comment from estory
This poem turns around on itself like a kalaidascope of images, all colors and light and iridescence. I like the alliterations and echoing sound patterns. It has a nice waving, undulating rhythm to the meter that works well to highlight the theme. estory
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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This poem turns around on itself like a kalaidascope of images, all colors and light and iridescence. I like the alliterations and echoing sound patterns. It has a nice waving, undulating rhythm to the meter that works well to highlight the theme. estory
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend, I surely appreciate it.
Comment from gsuarez
The majesty of rainbows well depicted in both the poem and the photo. Of all the attributes of a rainbow, the one that resonates most is: "Natures defiance" certainly nature (the rainbow) trumps all the misery and heartache we encounter in this earthly domain.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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The majesty of rainbows well depicted in both the poem and the photo. Of all the attributes of a rainbow, the one that resonates most is: "Natures defiance" certainly nature (the rainbow) trumps all the misery and heartache we encounter in this earthly domain.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from rjuselius
This is an astounding piece of poetry dear anonymous! It can be juxtaposed between the beauty of the rainbow and the fragility of the human heart.
Thanks for sharing! Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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This is an astounding piece of poetry dear anonymous! It can be juxtaposed between the beauty of the rainbow and the fragility of the human heart.
Thanks for sharing! Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Sweet Rebekka, that was very kind.
Comment from Ben Colder
Rainbows are amazing. I have seen double rainbows and watched them for miles. A glorious sight to see them across an open meadow. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Rainbows are amazing. I have seen double rainbows and watched them for miles. A glorious sight to see them across an open meadow. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend, Ben. Your comments are most apprecciated.
Comment from dragonpoet
These lines clearly and wonderfully describe a rainbow and how it is formed and of its beauty.
I like the use of rainbow colors in the background and print but you may want to find a darker shade of blue. I, with my bad eyesight. found it a little hard to read.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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These lines clearly and wonderfully describe a rainbow and how it is formed and of its beauty.
I like the use of rainbow colors in the background and print but you may want to find a darker shade of blue. I, with my bad eyesight. found it a little hard to read.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you, my friend, I just went to change the color, the darker made more glare, I lightened it a tad.
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You're welcome. The change has made it much easier to read.
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You're welcome. The change has made it much easier to read.
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Comment from Rubylou
What is more naturally beautiful than the appearance of a rainbow after or during a fresh rain shower?
You captured this essence with your words.
One small thing, should there be an apostrophe in the first line: "Natures" - Nature's?
Very enjoyable poem.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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What is more naturally beautiful than the appearance of a rainbow after or during a fresh rain shower?
You captured this essence with your words.
One small thing, should there be an apostrophe in the first line: "Natures" - Nature's?
Very enjoyable poem.
Rubylou
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much, my friend, ya know I did not have an apostrophe, someone said I needed it, I took their word for it, Darn, I'm taking it out, Should of left it alone, lol
Comment from c_lucas
Rainbows are a phenomenon of Nature. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest. A very colorful subject indeed.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Rainbows are a phenomenon of Nature. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest. A very colorful subject indeed.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend, I appreciate it greatly.
