Rainbows (Tableau Poem)
contest entry-rainbows66 total reviews
Comment from rheabug1
First of all Thanks for sharing your poem. It was great with a wonderful image to accompany. I understand you choice of colors on the text but it is really strange for my eyes. Line count is right on target. Good luck with this. I think you have a winning admission here. Hugs Linda
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
First of all Thanks for sharing your poem. It was great with a wonderful image to accompany. I understand you choice of colors on the text but it is really strange for my eyes. Line count is right on target. Good luck with this. I think you have a winning admission here. Hugs Linda
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thank you Linda, for your kind comments, it is much appreciated.
Comment from Oatmeal
Rainbows is a beautiful poem. The arrangement is understandable and effective.
Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Descriptive picture.
Informative and enlightening.
Everything was clean. Comprehensible and very nicely written.
The words you chose worked well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
Rainbows is a beautiful poem. The arrangement is understandable and effective.
Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Descriptive picture.
Informative and enlightening.
Everything was clean. Comprehensible and very nicely written.
The words you chose worked well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Awe, Thanks Miss Oatmeal, you are very sweet and kind:)))
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Thanks for your rainbow poem tableau tribute, Rainbows introduce us to reflections of different beautiful possibilities so we never forget that pain and grief are not the final options in life.
All the best...
Bill~
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
Thanks for your rainbow poem tableau tribute, Rainbows introduce us to reflections of different beautiful possibilities so we never forget that pain and grief are not the final options in life.
All the best...
Bill~
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you, my friend, for your kind review.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend I really enjoyed reading your Rainbow poem I like the structure in the flow of it I like the descriptive adjectives and verbs that you use this is very nicely written thank you so much for sharing this with us and God bless you
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
Hello friend I really enjoyed reading your Rainbow poem I like the structure in the flow of it I like the descriptive adjectives and verbs that you use this is very nicely written thank you so much for sharing this with us and God bless you
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend, I do appreciate it.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery from the picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery from the picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Teri, for the kind comments and review.
Comment from Celtic Angel
I enjoyed your poem and how you've married art and science to describe the beauty of the rainbow. The chosen artwork, colors, and formatting showcase the piece nicely. Well done!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
I enjoyed your poem and how you've married art and science to describe the beauty of the rainbow. The chosen artwork, colors, and formatting showcase the piece nicely. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend. I appreciate it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-Good imagery that
describes aspects of the rainbow:
"Rain's phenomenon"
-The last line is a very good conclusion
about the nature of rainbows.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
-Very nice image.
-Good imagery that
describes aspects of the rainbow:
"Rain's phenomenon"
-The last line is a very good conclusion
about the nature of rainbows.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Pam, I appreciate your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from donforclearn
This poem is well written. It gives the reader an unique perspective of a rainbow. Rainbow always give joyous feeling especially when generated by water and light which are the basis of life. Good Luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
This poem is well written. It gives the reader an unique perspective of a rainbow. Rainbow always give joyous feeling especially when generated by water and light which are the basis of life. Good Luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the contest on Rainbows
Excellent descriptive imagery in the Tableau poem
Mystery of light's spectrum revealed
Great double rainbow picture
I know the font is iridescent,
but it is very difficult to read on my screen
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
This is a fine entry for the contest on Rainbows
Excellent descriptive imagery in the Tableau poem
Mystery of light's spectrum revealed
Great double rainbow picture
I know the font is iridescent,
but it is very difficult to read on my screen
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much, my friend. Yeah, I just tried to lighten it a bit.
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Poet:
Your poem follows the specifications of the prompt to write a poem about a rainbow. I like that you chose the tableau, as by definition, the tableau paints a picture of your subject, which so fittingly, is the rainbow.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
Hi Poet:
Your poem follows the specifications of the prompt to write a poem about a rainbow. I like that you chose the tableau, as by definition, the tableau paints a picture of your subject, which so fittingly, is the rainbow.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Kim. Your comments are much appreciated.