Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello friend I really enjoyed reading your Rainbow poem I think that the flow is very smoothly done and the writing is very nice the alliteration is great and I like the descriptive words that you used thank you for sharing this

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

Thanks for your very kind review.

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Well, this is a bright and happy poem about a rainbow. I like your colour and I like your simple words.
Good title: Dance, rainbow, dance.
Positive and lively.
CG

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

Thanks for reading.

Comment from smbau

Good

The poem describes the rainbow dance very well. The poet used repetition of words very well. The picture, background and font colors matched the content of the poem. You may consider additional rhyming of words or a poet narrative about the style of writing could be helpful. Overall you a great poet.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing this joyous look at the rainbow and all the dreams it stirs in the hearts of small children and foolish men. If only...reaching the end of the rainbow is a dream worthy of keeping forever.

~patty~

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks for reading, Patty.

Comment from Charmisa Parker

Excellent

I love the rhyme that this poem has, and I love the picture! I'm weird but I love to dance in the rain lol, because I always found such scenarios beautiful and powerful when I see that in movies. Lol anyway good job and great work!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is a very good poem. It stands a chance in the contest. I usually lose, but I still enjoy the experience. I wish you the best and hope you win.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Thomas.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about the rainbow to dance in its colours and wishing for another beautiful day after and promises to catch the pot of gold one day; I liked and enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

a lovely little MELODIC DITTY to bring a pleasant smile! Sorry to not have the sixth star you deserve for this little gift! Good luck in the contest! I cannot suggest anything that would improve this lovely work in any way! HIS GRAYNESS

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks so much for this very kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed my little poem.

reply by His Grayness on 21-Jun-2017

My Pleasure indeed! HIS GRAYNESS

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This poem has a sprightly tune that young readers would enjoy. I like how you address the rainbow directly (apostrophe) and describe it as an elusive, playful friend.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks for reading, Rod.