Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Thanks for the fun poem. You know, if we look straight and deep into a chimpanzee's eyes, an intelligent self-assured personality looks back at us. If they are animals, what must we be? Cheers and all the best...

Bill~

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

thank you so much, Bill. I appreciate your kind words,

~patty~

Comment from rosehill (Wendy)

Excellent

Nicely penned tetractys. These "Picture This" challenges are coming up with great photos. I too am having fun with each challenge and enjoy seeing all the poetry forms employed. I think you are the first to mention the napkin, although the hat plays a part in several. I am slowly making my way through all this weeks offerings. - Wendy

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

Hi Wendy; thank you so much for your lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Suave and Debonair" is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. It was fun to write,

~patty~

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Well you have certainly described the picture perfectly.
Tetractys? I had not have heard of these before. Good luck in the contest entry and the picture this challenge.

dip

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

hi dip; thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from BlueTiger

Excellent

Great job!
I find poems like this, with such limiting rules, to be extremely challenging to write. I usually can't come up with anything that fits the syllable rules. Your poem is well written and also makes the reader smile. Good luck on the contest!
-Blue

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

= Please remember:
1 = Challenge poems are only allowed to have =7= pumps max.
2 = Challenge poems should not be used in contests.

= Not mandatory, but it would be greatly appreciated it you change the picture out with another one, since you went over the limit---and used it in a contest.
= Otherwise, I'll receive some emails. (*<*) Thanks so much

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

Hi Jackie; I just went back and re-read your two emails. I didn't see anything about the rules 1 and 2 that you mention here. If anything, I'm a 'rules' girl.

I've taken the picture down and I will do better next month. It will be difficult to only use 7 pumps - I almost always use 19 - part of the reason why I review so much is to have the member dollars to do this!

Oh well,
~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend I enjoyed your fun poem you built the form well creating a poem that will make the readers smile well done good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017

Hi Jill; thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from bhogg

Excellent

Well, it looked like you fit the requirements of a strange format. Not sure I've seen this before. The post was fine, but to me, didn't really have a wow factor that would want me to read again or share. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017

Hi Bill; the poetic form was new to me, too. It isn't always easy to convey information in such a short format. I DO appreciate your time to read and review. Your feedback means a lot to me - I do enjoy writing longer poems,

~patty~

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Wonderful job you did with your entry. Very neat arrangement. I have never seen it before to my knowledge. The theme was well thought out. The meter count is correct.

It is perfectly written and completely error free.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017

Hi Camille; thank you so much for this wonderful review. I had a great time creating this poem,

~patty~

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this piece I thought you had a good use of descriptive adjectives and verbs and I like the alliteration a lot the structure and flow are very smooth I think that this is an excellent entry for the writing prompt

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017

Hi La La; thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~