Planet's Climate
Global climate needs to be healthy.60 total reviews
Comment from JDRBAR
Good. And very true. However, I don't believe man has any control over climate and if there is eventually a drastic change, I believe the planet and we will adapt rather than suffer any consequences.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Good. And very true. However, I don't believe man has any control over climate and if there is eventually a drastic change, I believe the planet and we will adapt rather than suffer any consequences.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello JDRBAR,
Thank you very much for reviewing, and sharing your views.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Natalie Walker
This is a great poem. It really delivers a message in just eight syllables. I like how you personified the planet/climate and how it pleads for its health, which is in our hands.
I didn't notice any errors or typos.
Nice work!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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This is a great poem. It really delivers a message in just eight syllables. I like how you personified the planet/climate and how it pleads for its health, which is in our hands.
I didn't notice any errors or typos.
Nice work!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Natalie Walker,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and morale boosting words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Aplgwest
Yes, our climate does seem unhealthy both physically and perhaps even worse, mentally. Great picture that symbolizes results of split between earthly need and human greed.
--Elaine
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Yes, our climate does seem unhealthy both physically and perhaps even worse, mentally. Great picture that symbolizes results of split between earthly need and human greed.
--Elaine
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Elaine Westheimer,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from MaggieF
Good choice of picture. We really need to take heed before it is too late to do anything about it. Great personification and good alliteration. Let's all try and save our planet! MaggieF
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Good choice of picture. We really need to take heed before it is too late to do anything about it. Great personification and good alliteration. Let's all try and save our planet! MaggieF
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello MaggieF,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from gsuarez
Excellent plea and social commentary. The picture chosen certainly hits the right chord: a lush blooming planet or one void of life. The choice is ours. A very powerful display.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Excellent plea and social commentary. The picture chosen certainly hits the right chord: a lush blooming planet or one void of life. The choice is ours. A very powerful display.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Gsuarez,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from TPAC
Very precise and direct to the heart of the matter, get the feeling the planet itself is crying, pleading for our help. Nicely bundled and presented by writer, illustrating their concerns about ongoing climatic changes.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Very precise and direct to the heart of the matter, get the feeling the planet itself is crying, pleading for our help. Nicely bundled and presented by writer, illustrating their concerns about ongoing climatic changes.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello TPAC,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Most of us know what to do to restore our earth and keep it healthy. There is certain things in nature that happens and we cannot stop it from happening.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Most of us know what to do to restore our earth and keep it healthy. There is certain things in nature that happens and we cannot stop it from happening.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Sandra,
Thank you very much for reviewing, and sharing your lovely views.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, Sir, we do have a right to milk the planet, but as you and I will most likely agree, but not to the point where there's nothing left. Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems. :-)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Yes, Sir, we do have a right to milk the planet, but as you and I will most likely agree, but not to the point where there's nothing left. Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems. :-)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Ric Myworld,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from rjuselius
this is a profound piece of poetry and an important environmental commentary dear rpsaxena! it speaks loud and clear and the message is a vital one.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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this is a profound piece of poetry and an important environmental commentary dear rpsaxena! it speaks loud and clear and the message is a vital one.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Rjuselius,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging words, and Good Luck Wishes backed by Blessings and....
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Dean Kuch
She most certainly does, RPSaxena, time and time and time again.
The problem is that no one with the wherewithal to do anything about it is...well... doing anything about it.
One of these days, Old Mother Earth is just going to get fed up and say, "Enough is enough; I quit!"
Excellent 2-4-2 on a very pertinent topic today.
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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She most certainly does, RPSaxena, time and time and time again.
The problem is that no one with the wherewithal to do anything about it is...well... doing anything about it.
One of these days, Old Mother Earth is just going to get fed up and say, "Enough is enough; I quit!"
Excellent 2-4-2 on a very pertinent topic today.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Dean Kuch,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and encouraging words.
"...Enough is enough; I quit!" Really wonderful.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
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You're very welcome, RP, and you do the same, my
~Dean :}
