Planet's Climate
Global climate needs to be healthy.60 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent imagery in your plea for the planet. Nice alliteration in "planet pleads". I admire your ability to get your point across in eight syllables. Perfect syllable count for the rules. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
Excellent imagery in your plea for the planet. Nice alliteration in "planet pleads". I admire your ability to get your point across in eight syllables. Perfect syllable count for the rules. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello W.J.Debi,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging words, and Best of Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very well written and powerful 2=4=2. We definitely need to be better stewards of the planet which is our home. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
A very well written and powerful 2=4=2. We definitely need to be better stewards of the planet which is our home. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Debbie,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging words, and Best Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right. But it's too late. Mankind has done irreparable damage to the planet. Will Earth recover? Unknown.
Good job on your 2-4-2 contest entry. Your few words state a scary scenario. The image is perfect.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
You are right. But it's too late. Mankind has done irreparable damage to the planet. Will Earth recover? Unknown.
Good job on your 2-4-2 contest entry. Your few words state a scary scenario. The image is perfect.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Jan,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging words, and Best Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Octavia
All rules followed on this 2-4-2 Poetry Contest.
I can't imagine writing such a short work but you managed to get your point across nonetheleess.
Good for you.
The artwork was perfect and complemented the poem perfectly7.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
All rules followed on this 2-4-2 Poetry Contest.
I can't imagine writing such a short work but you managed to get your point across nonetheleess.
Good for you.
The artwork was perfect and complemented the poem perfectly7.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Octavia,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting words, and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent presentation, RP and one of my favourite themes. A healthy climate, and that means everything.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
Excellent presentation, RP and one of my favourite themes. A healthy climate, and that means everything.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Gloria,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting words, and Best Wishes backed by SIX STARS.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Sis Cat
Wow, this is a simple yet powerful 2-4-2 with a profound and beautifully and compellingly expressed ecological message on our planet's need for a healthy climate. Thank you for sharing and even more for caring. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
Wow, this is a simple yet powerful 2-4-2 with a profound and beautifully and compellingly expressed ecological message on our planet's need for a healthy climate. Thank you for sharing and even more for caring. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Sis Cat,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging words, and Best Wishes for Success.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow you really hit the nail on the head with this one. Perfectly done and a strong message with a picture to make a spectacular statement. Very good entry
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
Wow you really hit the nail on the head with this one. Perfectly done and a strong message with a picture to make a spectacular statement. Very good entry
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Barb,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging words, and veiled Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Planet's Climate, is set up correctly and touches on the issue on global warming as it changes weather patterns and is set to devastate cities around the world.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
This 2-4-2, Planet's Climate, is set up correctly and touches on the issue on global warming as it changes weather patterns and is set to devastate cities around the world.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Bill Schott,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Everyone always talks about the world we're leaving to the younger generations but we also need to think about what kind of younger generations we're leaving to the world. Are we treating our world with love and respect by not littering? Are we teaching our kids the love of flowers, funny cuz I hate flowers, and all the berries and vegetables and stuff that are grown outside. It's a two way street. Great job
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
Everyone always talks about the world we're leaving to the younger generations but we also need to think about what kind of younger generations we're leaving to the world. Are we treating our world with love and respect by not littering? Are we teaching our kids the love of flowers, funny cuz I hate flowers, and all the berries and vegetables and stuff that are grown outside. It's a two way street. Great job
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Experiencing Liphe,
Thank you very much for your so thoughtful, lovely, and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Planet's Climate" is an extremely well-written piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
"Planet's Climate" is an extremely well-written piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Hello Duchessofdrumborg,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and MORALE BOOSTING words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
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~RP, you're very welcome, certainly deserved the morale boosting review.
Best wishes, , the Duchess