Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A well written and interesting chapter as always, my friend. Even in my childhood, I could not have imagined the technology we have today~Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

When you think of what we have now, and look back just a hundred years, it's amazing. Especially comparing it to the last two thousand years! Thank you, Debbie, for your continuing support, I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

In this chapter the reader finds out Daveth's father's name. He doesn't know much about his dad, but he does not that he was old. (Lol!)
You are finding it hard to explain to him the available information in the modern age that you are from, so you didn't even try.
Daveth was surprised about the indoor loo--quit understandable too.
Now, I'm left wondering what's in that third room.
Nicole

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thank you for another really lovely review, Nicole. I have a soft spot for Daveth, he's very protective of his mam, a bit like my sons are. Thanks for your continued support my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend you are building the story nicely I enjoyed again and cannot wait to read more to see what is going on I enjoyed again well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thank you, dear Jill, for your lovely review. I'm so happy you like the sequel and really appreciate your support. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from mbroyles2

Exceptional

Lovely story and I really like Daveth. He is a lovable character and so easy to connect with.
Love the description of the Manor.
Time to buckle in, it's starting to get good.
Michael

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thank you so very much for the 6 stars, Michael! That is so nice of you. I've got a soft spot for Daveth, too, he's a very proud young man and protective of his mam. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from rwilliam

Exceptional

This MIGHT be a blooper but you have them stop in FRONT of the cottage as she's asking questions about his dad and then suddenly they are inside with a loud knock surprising them and the mom going to the door. Just something to think about. :-)

I really enjoyed this chapter so much. It flowed beautifully and kept me feeling like a 'ghost' as I surveyed the rooms of this ancient time. Love it! :-D

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thank you so very much for the 6 stars, my friend. I will go and check that part out, thank you for mentioning it. It so nice when readers tell me what is or isn't right, it allows me to put things right. I'm really glad you are enjoying it though, thank you so much for the lovely review. :) Sandra xx

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello friend I find this to be very interesting piece it has a good element about it and flow and the structure is very good there's a lot of nice questions that are asked here that provoke interest with the reader thank you for sharing this

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thank you so much, Lalajovanoski, for your lovely review. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Well, here we are left waiting breathlessly to know what will be found-this was a great chapter full of action, mystery and intrigue. Very interesting.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017

Thank you again, JoAnn, for another lovely review. Lots happening for poor Veronica to sort out, but she loves it!! Big hugs my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Sandra

= That Victoria--she does get around. (*<*)
= I'm glad I haven't missed out on much of this story.
= Super end hook. Can't wait to see what surprise awaits.
= Great writing, my friend.

Cheers ... Jax (*<*)

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017

Thank you, Jackie, I'm pleased you are back and I do hope you really are okay now(?) I hated the thought you were so unhappy. I'm really pleased you like how my new adventure is going, thanks, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 19-Jun-2017

Thank you so much. With the love and support from Tom and his family, I'm doing much better. June 30 will be a rough day. My son retires from the Navy after 30 years service, but hostilities being what they are--I won't be there.

We are meeting family that weekend in Laughlin, which is a smaller version of Las Vegas, and only an hour away. So, I'll be surrounded with lots of love. (*<*)

Thank you for your support. Much appreciated, my friend. Cheers

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, sounds kind of strange going through Lady Ann's house before she was born...and great you could tell us the surprise...HELLO...LOL...understand Daveth is not so bright...is going to make it a bit harder on Veronica...I feel like when I say Daveth name...I haven't finished the sentence yet...LOL...it's sounding great...let's see where it takes us...very well written chapter sweet girl...love ya soooo you...Linda xxoo

how is everyone doing????...I hope well...always in my prayers...say hi to Ian for me...xxoo

still working my behind off...if there were only more hours in the day....sigh...love xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017

LOL!! Linda, you never give up hinting, do you!!!! LOL, I'm not telling you what's in the attic, Veronica hasn't told me yet!! LOL. Thank you, my sweet friend, for the lovely 6 stars, and the wonderful, funny review, just loved it! Love you too! xxx Sandra

Yes, all is quiet on the Ian and Sarah front, your prayers are working! Bless your heart.

Now, don't you go overdoing the work, I don't want to hear you've knocked yourself out. There are never enough hours as we get older, I'm not sure if it's us slowing down or the clock is speeding up! :( Just take care! Big hugs! xxxx

reply by l.raven on 19-Jun-2017

oh your a scary person...LOL..if Veronica hasn't told you...what next...LOL...I had a few bad days...but am doing better...two rooms left...one big...my daughter is in Florida...and she calls to help me along...can't wait till it's over...you are always soooo welcome sweet angel...and so glad to hear all is looking good on the home front...big love all around...LOve xxoo Linda

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I truly did not see any thing that needed corrected. A very interesting piece of writng and I am so glad I was involved in the last ones so this one I understand

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017

Thanks, Barb, for another lovely review. I'm really pleased you are coming along with me and my story. I really appreciate you. :) Sandra xx