Sadness
Feeling blue11 total reviews
Comment from smbau
Liked the poem and its content. Poem is about sadness. The repeated phrases act as a refrain in song's lyrics. The picture, background and font colors match the peach of the poem. For added flavor, you may consider adding more rhymes to your poem..."around my head afloat' "land on my heart await' Awesome job!
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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Liked the poem and its content. Poem is about sadness. The repeated phrases act as a refrain in song's lyrics. The picture, background and font colors match the peach of the poem. For added flavor, you may consider adding more rhymes to your poem..."around my head afloat' "land on my heart await' Awesome job!
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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Thanks for your review.
