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Comment from Badger_29
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Absolutely appropriate image. The thought itself raises questions, which, in turn, raise more questions. This is a very valuable writing tool which I will call a "domino question effect."

Well done!

Blessings,
Brother Badger

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    i love your "domino question effect" My question is -
    Do questions end as abruptly as dominoes when the last one falls? Just 'food for thought' LOL Thanks for your supportive review
reply by Badger_29 on 23-Jun-2017
    No, because then i would ask more, like, are there more dominos? And someone with a steady hand to set them back up?!, lol
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    What if there's no one else there? Does the game end, or just put on hold. Do you want a think box challenge? Questions can go to infinity.. have you the time or the desire to keep this up? LOL?
reply by Badger_29 on 23-Jun-2017
    Interesting question. If the game ends, then we move to a new one. But, I don't think it's that simple. I think that, by sheer necessity, it morphs into a different version of that game, one with more variables, or dimensions?
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Which kind of variables? By dimensions it that referring to a place or measurement of game pieces?
reply by Badger_29 on 25-Jun-2017
    Mathematical variables, and all three dimensions . . .
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Is this new morphed game still played off the floor and what are you calling it?
reply by Badger_29 on 29-Jun-2017
    I am calling it,
    "You Win"!
    A blessing to have this wonderful exchange of wit, it sharpens our quills.

    Blessings,
    BB
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
    There is no winner. It just reminds us that question from choices are ad finitum(?). The fun part for me was simply your rise to the occasion. Thank you the brain cell stimulation.
    Blessings back
reply by Badger_29 on 29-Jun-2017
    XOXOX,
    BB
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A poignant write as our behaviour says much about who we really are, good luck with the contest. We have choices and should use them wisely, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
    Dolly, thank you very much for your wishes and review.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Very well done, my friend. This is a strong photo. Some would say that a photo is worth a thousand words but this chosen photo - you have well expressed with only six very strong words...you go girl. I really like what you are saying because...so true, so true. Have a most beautiful Sunday,guuuuuurrrrrrlllllllll.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
    Thanks Tier, I value your opinions and ratings. Hugs
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Oh wow this one is perfect. Behavior is seen first of all and usually judged before the reason is answered. Very deep and so very well done

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    I'm glad you liked it. That picture itself poses many questions, such as why did I choose it?!! Behavior is an interesting subject for me. Thanks so much, I always value your opinion.
Comment from Ogden
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It cannot be denied that we are judged by our behavior.
Your artwork, depicting someone deciding what to do, is well-chosen. ("Life Is But a Dream" is the artist's name, not the title of the illustration.) Good luck with this and your other Fs writing.
Don (aka Ogden)

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    Don, that is the artists name you're correct. The title of the picture I used is 'Man in the Middle' Your confusion was intended to help--thank you. Also I appreciate your review.
reply by Ogden on 17-Jun-2017
    I am sorry, bucketlist. I did misinterpret your acknowledgement, and thought you would want to edit it.
    Don
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    No problem, Don. It's a very unusual name of the artist.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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'Behaviours seen will often raise questions'
Gosh what a wise and concise piece and writing, very very well done and good luck in the competition, great artwork too kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    For a 6 word poem I can only appreciate your review