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Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL! Now this is my kind of horror, now matter how bad it gets, there is always a little something to cushion the fall. I've missed reading your posts, but for some reason I stopped getting the messages. Oh, well, nice to cross paths, and I wish you the best in the contest. :-)
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LOL! Now this is my kind of horror, now matter how bad it gets, there is always a little something to cushion the fall. I've missed reading your posts, but for some reason I stopped getting the messages. Oh, well, nice to cross paths, and I wish you the best in the contest. :-)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice work, Mikey! I enjoyed your humor, especially in the first commercial break. Go fly a kite, lol. I thought the sabotage aspect of your movie plot was well done and not all unlikely. Good luck in the contest!
Take care,
Russell
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Nice work, Mikey! I enjoyed your humor, especially in the first commercial break. Go fly a kite, lol. I thought the sabotage aspect of your movie plot was well done and not all unlikely. Good luck in the contest!
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
Comment from kathleenspalding
Haha! Very funny - the real action's in the studio, LOL!
Picky bits-
commercial (LOL!!!!) ...needed anything(comma instead of period) (s)he told...
I see nothing....reword for action dialog (just 'skeletons,' not 'skeletal remains' (shock, grief)?
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Haha! Very funny - the real action's in the studio, LOL!
Picky bits-
commercial (LOL!!!!) ...needed anything(comma instead of period) (s)he told...
I see nothing....reword for action dialog (just 'skeletons,' not 'skeletal remains' (shock, grief)?
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is great. It's more funny than scary. I would wish you well in the contest, but since I entered too I hope you crash and burn.
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This is great. It's more funny than scary. I would wish you well in the contest, but since I entered too I hope you crash and burn.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
Comment from apky
Well written and humrous piece. We really need to know that Earth is our only true home - a bird in hand, so to speak - and we should take goo care of it.
Best,
Apky
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Well written and humrous piece. We really need to know that Earth is our only true home - a bird in hand, so to speak - and we should take goo care of it.
Best,
Apky
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Michael,
hahaha... this is hysterical. I love it! You did a great job using all 5 senses and incorporating the topic into a script and a Dr Terry Fying's Crumbling Crypt contest entry. I think you are going to win, you got my vote.
Gypsy hugs
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Hello, Michael,
hahaha... this is hysterical. I love it! You did a great job using all 5 senses and incorporating the topic into a script and a Dr Terry Fying's Crumbling Crypt contest entry. I think you are going to win, you got my vote.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm wondering when society will learn that tolerance is the only way to survive. I doubt we will ever learn that lesson. You contest entry is very well written and I enjoyed reading. Good luck.
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I'm wondering when society will learn that tolerance is the only way to survive. I doubt we will ever learn that lesson. You contest entry is very well written and I enjoyed reading. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Interesting stories told between the happenings on set, in the control booth, and the 1949 sci-fi film, with great character names, and a great twist with Madame O's highly contagious disease. Great write for this challenge,
cheers,
valda
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Interesting stories told between the happenings on set, in the control booth, and the 1949 sci-fi film, with great character names, and a great twist with Madame O's highly contagious disease. Great write for this challenge,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
Comment from frierajac
Most of this is off the wall funny. I could never put a reference to a swastika in a humorous script. The aside for a commercial is odd.
There is a hidden innuendo about the leading man touching the actresses privates.
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Most of this is off the wall funny. I could never put a reference to a swastika in a humorous script. The aside for a commercial is odd.
There is a hidden innuendo about the leading man touching the actresses privates.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, this is the zany kind of script in which I would recognize your signature style from even if I was in outer space. What is really cool is that we humanoids haven't fundamentally changed despite the fact we have foolishly frittered away our paradise called first earth.
The ad midstream is a blast as was the fact that somehow everyone had been killed off among the settlers except for white people.
Great job and best wishes to you with this pure genius. Oh ya, and win the contest too!
Ange
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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Ha, this is the zany kind of script in which I would recognize your signature style from even if I was in outer space. What is really cool is that we humanoids haven't fundamentally changed despite the fact we have foolishly frittered away our paradise called first earth.
The ad midstream is a blast as was the fact that somehow everyone had been killed off among the settlers except for white people.
Great job and best wishes to you with this pure genius. Oh ya, and win the contest too!
Ange
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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Well ... okay, I WILL take credit for zany. If I'm at a loss, which is most of the time, I do just go for crazy and hope for the best. HAHAHA! You did catch some of the points I tried to sneak into the craziness. Mostly I was trying to get away with some things which apparently I was zany enough to do, or vague enough.
It's a tough field and horror is not my forte and it IS theirs. But, zanier things have happened. :))
Thanks a million, Ange. This just happens to be a day a smile is most welcome. Mav
