Lovers
Passion15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rictameter. Syllable count is correctly done. The topic is great and well thought through. The passion between two lovers are something very special.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2017
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A very well-written Rictameter. Syllable count is correctly done. The topic is great and well thought through. The passion between two lovers are something very special.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2017
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Thanks Sandra for your supportive review and stars.
Comment from Leena
Learnt about the 'rictameter' through your post which totally justifies it. The passionate love is expressed very well in your poem. Each line is connected. Its commendable you maintained the flow while sticking on the requirements of this poetry form.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2017
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Learnt about the 'rictameter' through your post which totally justifies it. The passionate love is expressed very well in your poem. Each line is connected. Its commendable you maintained the flow while sticking on the requirements of this poetry form.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much Leens, for your complimentary review, and stars. I appreciate you grading so well.
Comment from MaggieF
Beautiful picture. Very sexy, sensual poem. They are side by side neither outshining/outdoing each other. Good subtle alliteration. Feelings from beginning to end. Enjoyed. MaggieF
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2017
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Beautiful picture. Very sexy, sensual poem. They are side by side neither outshining/outdoing each other. Good subtle alliteration. Feelings from beginning to end. Enjoyed. MaggieF
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2017
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Thanks Maggie, for taking the time to review this. I'm glad you found it sensual, that was my intention. I had not heard of that form of poetry before ' ''Twas good to hear from you.
Comment from Badger_29
I simply loved the image, theme, style, flow, word choice, and climax. A very clever example f the Rictameter. Love the symmetry.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2017
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I simply loved the image, theme, style, flow, word choice, and climax. A very clever example f the Rictameter. Love the symmetry.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2017
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I'm so glad you enjoyed the read, and the way I wrote the poem. The ascending and descending syllable counts had only one option to be written LOL I sincerely thank you for a wonderful review. I am truly blessed to have your feedback.
Happy Sunday
Trisha
Comment from His Grayness
All I can say is "thanks" for the lovely example of this really uncommon style of poetry, perfectly well delivered and beautifully presented in artwork accompanying. I cannot suggest anything to improve this work and thank the author for the rare and uncommon lesson! HIS GRAYNESS
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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All I can say is "thanks" for the lovely example of this really uncommon style of poetry, perfectly well delivered and beautifully presented in artwork accompanying. I cannot suggest anything to improve this work and thank the author for the rare and uncommon lesson! HIS GRAYNESS
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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You are welcome, His Grayness. I am so delighted that you enjoyed the style, and my use of it. Thank you so much for your complimentary review
Trisha
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You are Indeed welcome! Keep up the good stuff! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
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Vance,it's now added to my Bucket List LOL
