Love's Short Life
She asks, How much do you love me?4 total reviews
Comment from CammyCards
Very amusing. Thanks for the laugh. Well executed.Good selection of hesitating utterances. Thank you for using my picture to illustrate your poem.
CammyCards
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Very amusing. Thanks for the laugh. Well executed.Good selection of hesitating utterances. Thank you for using my picture to illustrate your poem.
CammyCards
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you for your talent and for reviewing my 5-7-5 poem. Your comments are very encouraging.
Happy Tuesday
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL this one definitely fulfills the contest entry of humor. A play on the famous poem and a take off of trying to figure the ways. Very well done....
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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LOL this one definitely fulfills the contest entry of humor. A play on the famous poem and a take off of trying to figure the ways. Very well done....
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Enough to frustrate any girl . I wanted to put a blank (third line) to imply he doesn't love her, but there would have been no syllables!
Thanks so much for your kind review. I'm so glad it made you laugh.
Comment from hammy45
made me smile. Starts off as Shakespearean style and love the twist in the last line. A bit of old and modern style put together in such a short piece. Love it.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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made me smile. Starts off as Shakespearean style and love the twist in the last line. A bit of old and modern style put together in such a short piece. Love it.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Hammy, thanks for your kind review. Suggestions as to change anything to make it better?
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If I was to change anything I would take out the sh.t on 3rd line. Your poem is funny yet light and I don't think you need it to make it funny.
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I'll consider it thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very funny! I think you did a great job with just the three lines. And that may be the most unique third line I've ever run into. This was a classic. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Very funny! I think you did a great job with just the three lines. And that may be the most unique third line I've ever run into. This was a classic. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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I'm so glad you found it funny. That was the goal, plus I paid $5.50 to enter 17 syllables in the contest LOL. Thanks for your review, stars, and compliments .
