Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for reminding us about the Lyricat Sonnet form and embedding it in your dramatic photograph. I admired your short, intense lines and repeats for emphasis. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017

Thank you Joan. Wonder what ever happened to I am Cat

reply by Joan E. on 09-Jun-2017

Hopefully, she's just on hiatus and will return the way Kiwigirl recently did. Smiles- Joan

Comment from sunnilicious

Exceptional

This was a beautiful poem to read. The lyrical tempo was great. Nice flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good feels conveyed in a poetic message. Good visual imagery created. Nice work. Hope your week is going great. Good night :)

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thank you Alicia. For such a glowing review. I am most delighted with your comments and the stars.

Comment from sharonlshelley

Excellent

Nice work well written and interesting to read I am quite new to this site so I am writing and reading as I am going enjoying peoples work I find all varieties of poetry interesting

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thank you Shareonshelley. Welcome to the site. You came to the right spot to find that.

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

You've written a good poem.
The artwork supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your Lyricat Sonnet.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thank you Nikki-Nicole. Glad you liked it.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

I loved this poetic form. It seems you have a great deal to teach about sonnets and their varying styles.

You created a flow of words that tell the tale of a building storm. I could almost feel the mood of the room change as I read. It was suddenly full of static and the oppression of the changing barometer.

thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thank you very much patty. I loved your perceptive comments.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

You know,Tom, I had totally forgotten about this form and that I had created it. If I remember rightly the Cat that created the original lyricat didn't go much on this either, so I totally expunged it from my memory. Even seeit did not remind me of my part in it.

However, seeing what you have made of it here, make me believe that, after all, it does seem to have some virtues. This is really effective. Thanks for reminding me.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thank you Pantygynt. You bet! I always have appreciated you creativity.

reply by Pantygynt on 06-Jun-2017

Thank you.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Lyri-Cat sonnet. It surely seems that the creativity is blooming. It seems that it worked well in this scenario. That cloud seems scary and can bring big storms or heavy rains.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thank you Sandra. Always a pleasure to see a review from you. Indeed a scary cloud.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a profound piece of poetry dear treischel! i love the wording, it is close to ingenious. it is also clever and insightful.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thank you rebekka, for your wonderful words. I blush from the glow,

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

This is a dire warning indeed. Your poem flowed well with good rhythm and great imagery. Good subtle alliteration. I loved 'What threat invests this gathering gloom, turning day to night' very Romeo and Juliet. MaggieF

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thank you Maggie. My that is very high praise.