This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Veronica Meets Daveth"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
It all looked perfect to me, Sandra. She certainly
has a lot to face upto.
I'm left wondering why she is there, and what's she expected to do.
Looking forward to the next part.
Blessings,
Margaret
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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It all looked perfect to me, Sandra. She certainly
has a lot to face upto.
I'm left wondering why she is there, and what's she expected to do.
Looking forward to the next part.
Blessings,
Margaret
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much, Margaret. Yes, Veronica has lots to sort out this time. Big hugs :) Sandra xx
Comment from ronnie k
Oh Sandra, have not reviewed you for some time so I thought it made no sense to try a review but it was a very enjoyable story line and the word use gave me a reference, I remember the time, and I was right at home with this read, thank you.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Oh Sandra, have not reviewed you for some time so I thought it made no sense to try a review but it was a very enjoyable story line and the word use gave me a reference, I remember the time, and I was right at home with this read, thank you.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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That is so nice of you, Ronnie, thank you so much. I am delighted you enjoyed this chapter in the story and that you rated it a six. You really are so kind, my friend. Thank you. :) Big hugs, Sandra. xx
Comment from royowen
It seems OK to me Sandra. The fact that she's been sent back to the year 1846, long before even Lady Ann was born. She is meeting daughter Ann's friend Daveth. And of course she has misgivings and questions, but I'm sure things will take shape...her specialty...helping people. Great theme, you've hit a scribal goldmine, Sandra, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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It seems OK to me Sandra. The fact that she's been sent back to the year 1846, long before even Lady Ann was born. She is meeting daughter Ann's friend Daveth. And of course she has misgivings and questions, but I'm sure things will take shape...her specialty...helping people. Great theme, you've hit a scribal goldmine, Sandra, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Hi Roy! Thank you so much for your lovely review, and the great encouragement you continue to give me.You're such a lovely friend. :) Sandra xxx
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Always welcome
Comment from Mustang Patty
She certainly has huge tasks before her. She needs to find out why she's there, and what she is expected to do. Looking forward to reading the next part,
~patty~
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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She certainly has huge tasks before her. She needs to find out why she's there, and what she is expected to do. Looking forward to reading the next part,
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much, Patty, for the lovely review. I'm glad you liked it so far. Lots for Veronica to find out. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I remember the first part when the beings were talking and I too want to know when she is chosen to do whatever she is to do. Great writing as I could feel the scene as you desctibed it
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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I remember the first part when the beings were talking and I too want to know when she is chosen to do whatever she is to do. Great writing as I could feel the scene as you desctibed it
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Barb, I'm glad you enjoyed this part. Veronica is getting very frustrated as well, at not knowing what's going on. LOL, I'm waiting to find out, then I can pass it on! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
So, here we go again, and this time things are a little different. Should be interesting...
. "Let's forget about all this for now," I said with a smile. - delete the full stop from the beginning here.
"How do ya know me name? Who are ya?" With squinted eyes - the font/size changes here.
She said me you needed my help, is that right?" - said to me or delete me?
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Hi there,
So, here we go again, and this time things are a little different. Should be interesting...
. "Let's forget about all this for now," I said with a smile. - delete the full stop from the beginning here.
"How do ya know me name? Who are ya?" With squinted eyes - the font/size changes here.
She said me you needed my help, is that right?" - said to me or delete me?
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Sorted!! Thanks, G. Why do I always miss something? I think I need new glasses. Thank you, my friend, for spotting them, and for letting me know. Big hugs! Sandra xx
