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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "What will I write today?"
a collection of my poetry

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Comment from Rasmine
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I know, I feel that way too! I'm still trying to find access to my muse for a contest. It's been difficult.

My favorite stanza:
My mind is full of locutions
How can I express them best?
Do I string them together?
To tell a simple tale?
Do I write about puppy dog tails?
And Kitty growls (love this with 'dog tails' :P )

TC, hope your muse visits soon!

 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 30-May-2017
    Hi TC; my muse has arrived, but the story is difficult. I can't get the character to fit the picture in my head. It will probably take a few days to write this one.
    I hope you are feeling better,
    ~patty~
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Good morning Patty,

This is an interesting piece because I think that most of us often face this dilemma yet you have allowed us to hear your thinking as you made that decision, thereby creating this enjoying and relative read.

I hope you have a wonderful day, my friend.

 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 30-May-2017
    Hi Tier; thank you for stopping by to read and review. Yes, I wrote this as I stared at the blinking cursor.

    ~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
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Writers often put themselves in emotional upheaval by worrying over what to write instead of just writing. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 30-May-2017
    Hi; thank you for reading about my daily musings as I approach the blank page. I appreciate your feedback,
    ~patty~
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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LOL this is fantastic and you put to rhythm what we wonder every time we sit down and ... panic.lol
this is very well done and I think you covered it very well

 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 30-May-2017
    Hi Barb; thank you for your kind words! I was hoping to describe the challenge we all experience on starting on a new project. Sounds like I nailed it,
    ~patty~
Comment from estory
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This is a great poem on the creative process, of that moment of imagination, when the possibilities, like an empty page, sit before us. the story is a glimpse of something larger, and it can go anywhere from here. that is the beauty of writing. It can take you anyplace, any time, to anyone. All of these open ended themes are in this poem. Asking questions was a great choice to make this theme relevant to the reader. estory

 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 30-May-2017
    Hi; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I so appreciate your comments about this poem. It was a bit of my musings as I looked at that blinking cursor. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal,
    ~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem when the Muse AWOL and leave us to try and figure out what to write on our own. In this times we realize how important our Muse become in our lives.

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 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 30-May-2017
    Hi Sandra; thank you for reading my poem about getting ready to tackle the 'blank page.' It seems that I face this challenge each morning. I appreciate your feedback,
    ~patty~
Comment from DR DIP
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Patty, I am sure this question or dilemma will pop its head up with many out there today as it would every day. Following your muse or impetus or inspiration to write on a subject will always be an interesting challenge. Thanks for sharing.

dip

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 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 30-May-2017
    Hi dip; thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I was feeling poetic this morning
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    ~patty~