Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Chapter Neun part zwei"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
30 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Things seem to be working out for Anderson. It doesn't look good for his ex-wife. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hello my friend
Things seem to be working out for Anderson. It doesn't look good for his ex-wife. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Anderson always makes things happen. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MelB
Another fine chapter, Barbara. I liked the part about the syrup. The picture is cute too! Such a simple idea to just ask about the painting. Glad you made it through another school year.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Another fine chapter, Barbara. I liked the part about the syrup. The picture is cute too! Such a simple idea to just ask about the painting. Glad you made it through another school year.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Maybe too simple. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from Rasmine
Good illustration! :P I have found no errors. Maybe there are, I have been doing this all day and getting a bit tired of it--God, it takes forever to earn these blasted member dollars!
Okay, sorry about that. I'm glad you are out for the summer after tomorrow--yay! In my experience, I know the teachers are as excited as the children are.
TC
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Good illustration! :P I have found no errors. Maybe there are, I have been doing this all day and getting a bit tired of it--God, it takes forever to earn these blasted member dollars!
Okay, sorry about that. I'm glad you are out for the summer after tomorrow--yay! In my experience, I know the teachers are as excited as the children are.
TC
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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We are excited. I get to spend more time on my writing. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Annie_ Stone
That was a well written chapter and much enjoyed. I like the small details in it as well. Thanks for sharing us your book so far. Plan to read more. Annie
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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That was a well written chapter and much enjoyed. I like the small details in it as well. Thanks for sharing us your book so far. Plan to read more. Annie
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from mbroyles2
Another great chapter with a lead for Anderson about his ex-wife's drug use and a suggestion to just ask for the painting back.
The simplest answers can sometimes be the best.
Great stuff!
Michael
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Another great chapter with a lead for Anderson about his ex-wife's drug use and a suggestion to just ask for the painting back.
The simplest answers can sometimes be the best.
Great stuff!
Michael
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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I hope this simple answer is the correct one. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from light
It looks like Emily might be coming to live with her father. Two Jewish men now. Being harassed by the Russians. Not surprising. Goid chapter. Things are coming together.
Elaine
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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It looks like Emily might be coming to live with her father. Two Jewish men now. Being harassed by the Russians. Not surprising. Goid chapter. Things are coming together.
Elaine
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Now you done it. Left me thinking in mystery. Somebody is determined. We've come along way from jumping in the back seat of a stranger's car. Well done always. Blessings to you Barb.
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Now you done it. Left me thinking in mystery. Somebody is determined. We've come along way from jumping in the back seat of a stranger's car. Well done always. Blessings to you Barb.
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Publisher has the Manuscript. Now, I'm taking a breather. Will get back here doing something. Maybe reading your and a few other's great master pieces. Hold on to your hat, the wind is blowing. LOL.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend Anderson really has a lot to deal with at the moment his ex wife and her problem,trying to help Shauna and now two Jewish visitors I wonder what going to happen next I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Yes this is well written my friend Anderson really has a lot to deal with at the moment his ex wife and her problem,trying to help Shauna and now two Jewish visitors I wonder what going to happen next I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Babara, an excellent chapter, and I think there should be enough material to obtain custody of his daughter.
I think you need to backspace paraphernalia.
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Hi Babara, an excellent chapter, and I think there should be enough material to obtain custody of his daughter.
I think you need to backspace paraphernalia.
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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There isn't enough space, or so FS says for paraphernalia to fit. I tried. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Barbara,
another good instalment here. more domestic developments and a potential peaceful and easy resolution... but I doubt it. lol
arrived they found drug
paraphernalia. - unintentional line break here I think.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Hi Barbara,
another good instalment here. more domestic developments and a potential peaceful and easy resolution... but I doubt it. lol
arrived they found drug
paraphernalia. - unintentional line break here I think.
All the best
G
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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There isn't enough space, or so FS says for paraphernalia to fit. I tried I appreciate the kind review.
