My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Lovin' from Howie"a collection of my poetry
50 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
A bed-dog! I like the how-dare-you-suggest-I-move expression. This is one of those pieces where the picture plays an active part in the story of the poem. If you read it without the picture... well...
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
A bed-dog! I like the how-dare-you-suggest-I-move expression. This is one of those pieces where the picture plays an active part in the story of the poem. If you read it without the picture... well...
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hi there; thank you for the review. I'm glad you saw the picture as part of the presentation. Howie is one of those dogs I can't just help but write about,
~patty~
Comment from oliver818
Nice description of a dog, there's nothing better than having a pet sleeping on your bed. You summed that up well here.Thanks for sharing and have a great day.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
Nice description of a dog, there's nothing better than having a pet sleeping on your bed. You summed that up well here.Thanks for sharing and have a great day.
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hi there; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this little poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Aren't they wonderful--unconditional love at its best. He is so cute. A fun and furry 5-7-5 about Howie. Have a good holiday weekend, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
Aren't they wonderful--unconditional love at its best. He is so cute. A fun and furry 5-7-5 about Howie. Have a good holiday weekend, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hi Debbie; thank you so much for your time to read and review. This was a fun 5-7-5 to write about Howie and his love,
~patty~
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Buddy sounds like such a wonderful companion and you have put your special relationship into this 5-7-5 beautifully.
What a gorgeous photo to accompany
Have a lovely evening Patty
Mitchell
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
Buddy sounds like such a wonderful companion and you have put your special relationship into this 5-7-5 beautifully.
What a gorgeous photo to accompany
Have a lovely evening Patty
Mitchell
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hi Mitchell; thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from Heather Knight
You've written a cute little poem for a cute little friend. You seem to have some adorable pets. Is it just Leo and Howie or are there more?
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
You've written a cute little poem for a cute little friend. You seem to have some adorable pets. Is it just Leo and Howie or are there more?
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hi Maria; thank you so much for the lovely review. Currently, I only have Howie and Bernie. Leo and Howie have been gone since 2012.
~patty~
Comment from RGstar
I guess there is not much I can say here that you have not just said. Indeed, man's best friend...or if I may include...woman's.
Lovely.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
I guess there is not much I can say here that you have not just said. Indeed, man's best friend...or if I may include...woman's.
Lovely.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hi RG; thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~
Comment from sunao
Wow, that is a beautiful picture of your dog and such a lovely poem to go along with it. Please keep up the good work. Thank you so much for sharing and I hope that you have a wonderful day!
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
Wow, that is a beautiful picture of your dog and such a lovely poem to go along with it. Please keep up the good work. Thank you so much for sharing and I hope that you have a wonderful day!
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Hi there; thank you for reading another of my pieces. I'm glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 about Howie and his love,
~patty~
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Your welcome!
Comment from Bucketlist
Your guy needs a wax job LOL. Oh It's the dog you're referring to!!!
A cute short 5-7-5 p, with a cute dog. How old is Howie?
I only have positives to say
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
Your guy needs a wax job LOL. Oh It's the dog you're referring to!!!
A cute short 5-7-5 p, with a cute dog. How old is Howie?
I only have positives to say
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi Trisha; Howie is almost five years old. He is pretty healthy, though I just found out he needs to have a minor surgery on a hernia he has developed--common in little dogs.
Thank you for your time to read and review,
~patty~
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Unconditional love is great! I wish the little guy a quick recovery.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Patty, this is such an adorable Haiku on Howie, what a cute little fella lol. So fluffy and loyal. Good luck. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
Patty, this is such an adorable Haiku on Howie, what a cute little fella lol. So fluffy and loyal. Good luck. ~Kerry
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi Kerry; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. Howie is very deserving of this little poem, though he now tells me he wants a story all about him. I shall see...
~patty~
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lol, he must be very proud of his Mommy.
May he bask in the spotlight of your writings :)))
Comment from pbomar1115
I have never grown attached to an animal. So, if my idea about how I view the affection is not chummy enough for an animal lover than I will have lost a potential good friend. Animal lovers are well liked, putting me in a difficult position talking about their favorite subject all the time. I'm sure I do not have overflowing of words to express the attention an animal gives its master but I will say, animal love people because people love them. If you treat them badly, they will fear you. In my opinion, people love their dogs because they have a need to love over hate.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
I have never grown attached to an animal. So, if my idea about how I view the affection is not chummy enough for an animal lover than I will have lost a potential good friend. Animal lovers are well liked, putting me in a difficult position talking about their favorite subject all the time. I'm sure I do not have overflowing of words to express the attention an animal gives its master but I will say, animal love people because people love them. If you treat them badly, they will fear you. In my opinion, people love their dogs because they have a need to love over hate.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi there; do not think I would be offended by your words. I am well aware that I love my animals fiercely because they love me back. I do not open myself to hurt from people - I love my immediate family and my dogs with all my heart - the rest of society and mankind is simply background noise.
~patty~
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Thanks