Comment from nucleate

Excellent

A nice and heart stirring poem on the possibility of a long lasting love. I really liked it and afterward reflected on some of my past hopeful loves. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

thank you so much for reading and reviewing this piece. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

Comment from MelB

Excellent

This is a new form for me, so I had a little trouble catching a rhythm to it. But, it's a well written piece on love, with some great questions asked.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi Mel; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. This poetic form is both fun and challenging,
~patty~

reply by MelB on 25-May-2017

My pleasure.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

Ampeletum hey? Never heard of it but I like it. It's a beautiful poem. A true declaration of love. Ain't love great while it lasts? Pure ecstasy. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi Gypsy; thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The Ampeletum was one of those 'created' forms by a former FanStorian, and I kept the notes on it from back in 2011. It is a fun and challenging write.
I appreciate your kind and encouraging words,
~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written and you have done well to express the feelings of true love between soul mates I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Hi Jill; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

Comment from Elijah Davis

Excellent

My wife would love this poem! Great job! Everything is there to make it a complete great work. Best of luck to you with your future works my friend! Keep it up!

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Hi; thank you so much for the lovely review. I hope your wife does love the poem when you share it with her,
~patty~

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem "Love's Ampeletum". You rhymed it well and chose an appropriate picture.
Best of luck
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Hi Marybell; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

reply by marybell1 on 24-May-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Patty, Nice words that compliment this style really well and you have kept to the strict for at of this style ( I have never heard of it until now so Thanks for sharing ) A beautiful love poem Cheers Christineð???ð???

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Hi Christine; I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. This was a form created by one of our own FanStorians a few years back. I just felt like I needed a challenge; I got it,
~patty~

reply by Chrissy710 on 24-May-2017

Hi Patty I must give it a try Ta

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Patty, this is an enjoyable poem and format to appreciate. It is rhymed well and the presentation lends itself well to the words written. The feeling of love is clearly expressed and felt in this poem. Well done and thank you for sharing it. ~DD

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Hi DD; thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem,
~patty~

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What I like about this is it's very sweetness, its innocence, its honesty. Such a simple proclamation...this is precious. Love this!!!!

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Hi Karyn; thank you so much for the loving review. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. It was a fun and challenging write,
~patty~

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

What a beautiful poem, it's very very sweet. It really makes me imagine two people that fit together in an excellent manner.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Hi Chloe; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. I'm glad that you were able to see the relationship between the two lovebirds,
~patty~