Comment from Mai Mai

Excellent

This is an interesting piece. It reminds me of very young and new love. The wariness of feelings shows through perfectly. Good job & good luck.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi there; thank you for your time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this love poem. I appreciate your warm words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Lovely poem, and certainly seems like this is like a soul mate kind of love,
and one that will be for keeps. I like the positive, assertive way you
recaptured all your feelings and emotions in each phrase with great pic.
Thanks for sharing... this is an interesting poem style...great job.
Best wishes, Ronni

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi Ronni; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was a fun poetic form to work with; the write was fun and challenging. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very different type of poem and I enjoyed reading each stanza you wrote. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great job. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Good morning Teri; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. It was a fun and challenging write,
~patty~

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Hey, good morning, once again

I could feel one's joy, contentment that only a deep, unconditional love brings forth in one. Not to wax poetic...but it is an amazing feeling. Enjoyed.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi Ray; thank you for the wonderful review of this poem. I am glad you enjoyed it - I loved the challenge of writing it,
~patty~

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

Lovely romantic picture. I'm sure you have got all the technicalities right, I just loved this sweet and pure love poem, it made me smile, if only relationships were that simple young love is beautiful. Enjoyed. MaggieF

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi Maggie; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.
~patty~

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Love's Ampeletum" is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

thank you so much for this positive and encouraging review. Your kind words of encouragement are greatly appreciated,
~patty~

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 25-May-2017

~patty, you're more than welcome.

Bless you, the Duchess

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

Do like your poem, and if one has a true love as your poem shows, it can the greatest thing in the world and one's life will be happy to live with a mate that makes their life seem so complete.

And quite a diversified format describing this type of fairly new poetry and appreciate your notes about what an Ampeletum consist of and how it originated.

Caressa_08

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi Caressa; thank you so much for your review of this poem. I am glad you like this poetic form and I encourage you to try one of your own,
~patty~

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is an excellent love poem and this Ampeletum form is very well done, it makes the rhyme and flow connect and it is great the way love can make us feel****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for your lovely review of this poem. I appreciate your excellent rating and words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a charming poem. So down to earth and "real." The form is nice, too. Your new profile photo is adorable. A nice post all the way around. Marilyn

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi Marilyn; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. The form was a challenge, but it was fun, too.
Thank you for the compliment on my profile picture - I just had that done a few years ago. Your words of encouragement warm my heart,
~patty~

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Beautifully worded and presented. I rather like the format. It does require some thinking to make it work. I hope the rest of your week is blessed richly. Patricia

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi Patricia; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your warm words of encouragement. I hope you enjoy the rest of your week, and I thank you for your blessings,
~patty~