Thirst-Quencher
Every man's fantasy17 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your 100 Word Dash with us. You have managed to cover the writing prompt quite well, and tell the tale of a dastardly man and his quest for a kiss from a beautiful woman.
~patty~
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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thank you for sharing your 100 Word Dash with us. You have managed to cover the writing prompt quite well, and tell the tale of a dastardly man and his quest for a kiss from a beautiful woman.
~patty~
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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I am delighted to share this Short-short with you, patti, and appreciate the best wishes.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Two please? Did she want two drinks, or two kisses? I woud assume two kisses, since each drink costs a kiss. Good flash fiction piece. Good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Two please? Did she want two drinks, or two kisses? I woud assume two kisses, since each drink costs a kiss. Good flash fiction piece. Good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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So pleased she left you wondering. Thank you for sharing my short-short.
Comment from BeasPeas
Delightful short piece tells of a spontaneous kiss from a chance encounter. Your writing is clear and tells a little story. It doesn't feel forced and has good pace throughout. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Delightful short piece tells of a spontaneous kiss from a chance encounter. Your writing is clear and tells a little story. It doesn't feel forced and has good pace throughout. Marilyn
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed this short-short. It was a lot of fun to write.
Comment from rspoet
Ever man's fantasy for the price of a Tahitian Thirst-Quencher
not a bad bargain for a flaxen-haired nymph
I suspect two will do the trick nicely
An excellent entry for the kiss contest
with perfect art work to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Maybe, if you offer Tahitian Thirst-Quencher to voters...LOL
RS
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Ever man's fantasy for the price of a Tahitian Thirst-Quencher
not a bad bargain for a flaxen-haired nymph
I suspect two will do the trick nicely
An excellent entry for the kiss contest
with perfect art work to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Maybe, if you offer Tahitian Thirst-Quencher to voters...LOL
RS
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind praise and amusing commentary.
Comment from Thesis
Very creative. I've never heard of anyone's eyes as "Swiss-chocolate eyes", but there is a first for everything. You built the scene well and bikini clad nymph appear out of nowhere, locking her eyes on a pink drink, and bartering a kiss for a drink. Not bad, LOL.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Very creative. I've never heard of anyone's eyes as "Swiss-chocolate eyes", but there is a first for everything. You built the scene well and bikini clad nymph appear out of nowhere, locking her eyes on a pink drink, and bartering a kiss for a drink. Not bad, LOL.
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Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed my story. Thank you for your kind praise.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Yeah, baby. That's what I'm talking about. What island did you say this was? It sounds like a ver friendly place. Do the girls like old, fat guys?
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reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Yeah, baby. That's what I'm talking about. What island did you say this was? It sounds like a ver friendly place. Do the girls like old, fat guys?
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Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Hey, Thomas, it's every man's fantasy. Of course those girls do. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment from Cmelton
You get my last six star review. The end is what really clinched it. I absolutely loved this story. The best part: two please. Great job. I am going to become a fan and wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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You get my last six star review. The end is what really clinched it. I absolutely loved this story. The best part: two please. Great job. I am going to become a fan and wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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I am thrilled by your wonderful reaction to my story and would be honored to have you as a fan. Thanks so much or the high praise and the six-star bonus.
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Send me your name so I can become a fan. Then you can become a fan of mine and read my poetry and stories.
