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Life Struggles

His Love is Constant

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Comment from Irish Rain
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Amen. Hope you get worked through them. I'm trying too. Really pissed at relatives, and I can hold a grudge forever. I need to forgive, even though they're not sorry. Your poem is a beautiful inspiration to me. Blessings...

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments.

    I understand your grudge. Relatives can really piss you off and my daughter-in-law is my cross to bear. I've had to forgive her for my own sake but she will never say she's sorry.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by Irish Rain on 21-May-2017
    It's my husbands daughter. She won't apologize either. She has insulted both of us. Oh well....got a daughter-in-law like that too. Isn't family fun??? Can't wait til Christmas!!!
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    My son and his family moved from PA to Alaska so they don't have to deal with any of the family - so I don't have to worry about Christmas. I don't have to deal with her...But that means I don't get to see the grandchildren either. Yeah--family is fun. Well....maybe not!!!!
reply by Irish Rain on 21-May-2017
    The good and the bad of it. Ours are all right here. Except for the ones we like, ha ha.
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Life Struggles". It rhymed well and your photo also suggested stormy times. We all pray that our prayers will be answered.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you Marybell for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by marybell1 on 22-May-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a prayer to God with a request to grace to grow and share after losing the life battles and deserted by others, now wish to struggle anew; I liked and enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Oatmeal
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Jmf4119,

The poem rhymed beautifully. The theme flowed well all through your poem. I cannot say whether I liked the rhyme or the theme the best but both of them were very well done.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you Oatmeal for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Bill O'Bier
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Hello Janet:
I feel the hurt in your poem. Many times, the decisions we make hurt us. I have some regrets in that regard. But God has helped me through, which I am very thankful for. This has enabled me to forgive myself and move forward one day at a time. Thanks for sharing and blessing to you my friend.
Bill~

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you Bill for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments and understanding.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
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This shows a woman who can't get over lost earthly love but is praying for the strength to see God's/Jesus' lover will make her whole again to accept new earthly love.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by dragonpoet on 21-May-2017
    You're very welcome, Janet.

    Joan
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, God is good even when we feel brokenhearted. I like how the poem articulates so well the pain of being hurt by a loved one. Then the poem turns to the God Who heals the brokenhearted and always loves.

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from royowen
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I noted the confused and searching pilgrim in knowing not what he/she is searching for entirely, not knowing what God's love looks like, does it have expectations and rules? And it doesn't, the only choice is faith, and He will do the rest! Beautifully written, I remember the early days of knowing God, it took awhile for me to grasp absolutely, that God loved me beyond expectation, beyond my fallenness, He took me as I was, and wiped away my blemishes. Well done Janet, beautifully written, in even meter and abab rhyming, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you Roy for your encouraging, thoughtful and most generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind and compassionate comments that are always uplifting. Your faith shines through each line.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by royowen on 22-May-2017
    Well earned dear Janet
Comment from lalajovanoski
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I really liked reading this poem and found it to be full of some deep emotions about struggles in general life. I can relate! thanks for sharing this I enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from doggymad
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This was an interesting and thought provoking work. I am sorry to hear that things haven't been going to well for you.

for those who have faith then God is the one constant love in their lives, those who don't will always struggle. Still in the darkest moments it is hard to remember this

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you Freda for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments and understanding..

    Blessings
    Janet