Life Struggles
His Love is Constant66 total reviews
Comment from TastelessGum
I can relate to this, which may be a reason why I appreciated it so much. Beautiful language, it's not a terribly specific image, therefore people can place themselves in it like I. Great read, and you maintained your format and the pauses were well placed.
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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I can relate to this, which may be a reason why I appreciated it so much. Beautiful language, it's not a terribly specific image, therefore people can place themselves in it like I. Great read, and you maintained your format and the pauses were well placed.
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
God always draws me back and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment from Caressa_08
Oh, a very moving poem, and one deserving of a six, and am out, unfortunately... And Yes, He is there, I find at night before I sleep or morning when a life storm is there to greet me, and so unprepared, I give it to Him, when burdens are difficult to bear...These struggles so real, at least we have Him to help us through them.
God Bless...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Oh, a very moving poem, and one deserving of a six, and am out, unfortunately... And Yes, He is there, I find at night before I sleep or morning when a life storm is there to greet me, and so unprepared, I give it to Him, when burdens are difficult to bear...These struggles so real, at least we have Him to help us through them.
God Bless...Caressa_08
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you Caressa for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
God always draws me back and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Life Struggles" is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a true pleasure to both read and review. This is definitely a six, but tragically I only have fives left. At times life is just too cruel.
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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"Life Struggles" is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a true pleasure to both read and review. This is definitely a six, but tragically I only have fives left. At times life is just too cruel.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you Duchess for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments and virtual six.
Life can be too cruel but, God always draws me back and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
Hi Janet,
These two sentences are filled with golden threads of truth. KEEP WRITINGS!
God bless you too,
the Duchess
Comment from l.raven
HI Janet, I am having a few bad moments at this time myself...but I know God is getting my though them...I just wish it were faster...I love your poem...and the picture is stunning...take care sweet girl...things will work out...God Bless my friend...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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HI Janet, I am having a few bad moments at this time myself...but I know God is getting my though them...I just wish it were faster...I love your poem...and the picture is stunning...take care sweet girl...things will work out...God Bless my friend...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you Linda for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I always appreciate your comments.
Thank you too for your kindness.
God always draws me back and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
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you are always soooo welcome Janet...He does the same for me as well...we are truly Blessed...love ya xxoo
Comment from Cmelton
I feel your emotion and think you have written a wonderful poem. Great job and very beautiful, well chosen words. I think you will make it through your troubles.
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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I feel your emotion and think you have written a wonderful poem. Great job and very beautiful, well chosen words. I think you will make it through your troubles.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
I will make it through - God always draws me back and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment from LIJ Red
I would find a way to clarify who I was talking to, the cad that fled or the Lord who comforted, but that's just me, lost in any ambiguity. Excellent meter and rhymes.
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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I would find a way to clarify who I was talking to, the cad that fled or the Lord who comforted, but that's just me, lost in any ambiguity. Excellent meter and rhymes.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Thank you LIJ for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I great appreciate your comments and I will look at that last stanza again. I can see what you mean.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from XGoneX
Hi,
I could feel the emotional pain and struggle to let go as I read your poem. Many can relate. It's difficult to remove from our lives something that we feel attached to or hold memories we still cherish. I liked how the poem ends. Trust in God and let go.
Great flow of words and rhyming.
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Hi,
I could feel the emotional pain and struggle to let go as I read your poem. Many can relate. It's difficult to remove from our lives something that we feel attached to or hold memories we still cherish. I liked how the poem ends. Trust in God and let go.
Great flow of words and rhyming.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
God always draws me back and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend this is well written and very beautiful Gods love is around us and at times of trouble he is one person you can rely on to listen I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Oh yes my friend this is well written and very beautiful Gods love is around us and at times of trouble he is one person you can rely on to listen I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you Jill for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments and most generous rating. .
God always draws me back and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment from valmay
When time takes away the most precious irreplaceable things in our life! An honest look at the biggest picture of all, so eloquently expressed. The middle stanza beautifully written
and changes the focus. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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When time takes away the most precious irreplaceable things in our life! An honest look at the biggest picture of all, so eloquently expressed. The middle stanza beautifully written
and changes the focus. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments. I'm pleased that you followed my train of thought. .
God always draws me back to Him and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment from rjuselius
this is an exquisite piece poetry dear janet! it has all the potential of becoming the poem of the month.beautifully written my friend!
thank you for sharing!'
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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this is an exquisite piece poetry dear janet! it has all the potential of becoming the poem of the month.beautifully written my friend!
thank you for sharing!'
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you rebekka for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your comments and generous rating.
God always draws me back to Him and lifts me up. After all, in the end, we only answer to Him
Thank you again for your kindness.
Blessings
Janet.
