My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Ease the Pain"a collection of my poetry
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Comment from TAB_that's me
oh we all have to live our own pain but giving support to those you love can help them as much as anything. Let them know they are loved. They are forgiven.
Teresa
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reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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oh we all have to live our own pain but giving support to those you love can help them as much as anything. Let them know they are loved. They are forgiven.
Teresa
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Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review this poem of love. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~
Comment from Commando
Commendable artwork. The 12-line with six lines ending in a rhyme, and syllable count per line meets the contest rules explicitly. I have reviewed quite a lot of the authors poems, and this one is my favorite. I'm projecting this one to win 1st place in the contest. Well done, my dear friend.
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Commendable artwork. The 12-line with six lines ending in a rhyme, and syllable count per line meets the contest rules explicitly. I have reviewed quite a lot of the authors poems, and this one is my favorite. I'm projecting this one to win 1st place in the contest. Well done, my dear friend.
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Thank you so much, Bill! I'm glad you liked the poem and I'm very honored by your words of praise,
~patty~
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And it is an honor knowing you, Patty. Thank you for service, "to God and Country," my dear friend.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Only real love can fill the huge void they feel,
set a beautiful table and serve them this meal.
A beautiful poem, but the truth is you can prepare the most wonderful meal, but they must be willing to eat.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Only real love can fill the huge void they feel,
set a beautiful table and serve them this meal.
A beautiful poem, but the truth is you can prepare the most wonderful meal, but they must be willing to eat.
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Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Thomas; thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. One can only hope that if you set the table, hand them a fork - maybe, just maybe they will eat. (Thank you for your kind heart - I appreciate your honesty.)
~patty~
