The Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 74 "Gliding Therapy"Poems that are Sonnet Variations
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Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your Sestina Sonnet with us. Each line flows well and moves logically to the next. Your presentation and descriptive words paint a moving picture. Well done,
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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thank you for sharing your Sestina Sonnet with us. Each line flows well and moves logically to the next. Your presentation and descriptive words paint a moving picture. Well done,
~patty~
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you MustangPatty.I appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from TAB_that's me
I would like to try kayaking sometime. Your words float smoothly to my ears like the boat in the river:) Beautifully done.
Teresa
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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I would like to try kayaking sometime. Your words float smoothly to my ears like the boat in the river:) Beautifully done.
Teresa
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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Thank you Teresa. Give it a shot. It's fun. I own a KaYAK.
Comment from dmt1967
I have a cuckoo which seems to be everywhere I go. I never see him, just hear his cry lol. A stalking cuckoo. I like your bird poem and loved the picture. The poem flowed as smoothly as the stream. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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I have a cuckoo which seems to be everywhere I go. I never see him, just hear his cry lol. A stalking cuckoo. I like your bird poem and loved the picture. The poem flowed as smoothly as the stream. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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Thank you dmt.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Sestina sonnet. After winter and the cold times we were forced to stay inside our homes to stay warm. An outing into nature is just the thing to get the blood flowing again. Great capture.
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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A very well-written Sestina sonnet. After winter and the cold times we were forced to stay inside our homes to stay warm. An outing into nature is just the thing to get the blood flowing again. Great capture.
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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T^hank you Sandra. Excellent!
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. Another twist on a form with very informative footnotes. I appreciate the opportunity to again learn something new. Might we see a contest involving this form in the future? I would encourage you to create one. I would enter it!
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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Thank you for sharing. Another twist on a form with very informative footnotes. I appreciate the opportunity to again learn something new. Might we see a contest involving this form in the future? I would encourage you to create one. I would enter it!
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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Thank you KyColonelRandal, Not likely, as I generally don't do contests. But I appreciate the thought. Feel free to just try one.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the ladies sculling on the Mississippi, how they flow outside row glide as a healthy therapy to help go with the flow; I liked and enjoyed the feeling, feat, fantasy flow read.
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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This speaks about the ladies sculling on the Mississippi, how they flow outside row glide as a healthy therapy to help go with the flow; I liked and enjoyed the feeling, feat, fantasy flow read.
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Thank you Akcreator Litt Dear. You caotured the essence very well.
Comment from Popcorn69
I enjoyed reading this poem, and it follows all the rules of Sestina Sonnet. This reminded me of being on the lake while camping. Your word usage helps paint the perfect scene of being on a river (lake). This was an easy read as it flows very evenly between verses. I think you picture selection really adds an extra element to this. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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I enjoyed reading this poem, and it follows all the rules of Sestina Sonnet. This reminded me of being on the lake while camping. Your word usage helps paint the perfect scene of being on a river (lake). This was an easy read as it flows very evenly between verses. I think you picture selection really adds an extra element to this. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Thank you Popcorn69, great connection.
Comment from Dean Kuch
It seems we're at our best when we're outside.
I know for me, it makes my juices flow.
It yields that place to let our problems glide, ... Ya know, Tom.
I may have a dirty mind, but I couldn't help but notice the sexual references here.
Of course, I'm not gonna touch that topic with a ten foot pole, heh-heh.
In all seriousness, I get the fact that this was about competition rowing.
It is a very nice, well composed Sestina, indeed.
This photograph was taken by theautrhor author himself on May 3, 2017. ... Check the spelling of "author" in your notes here...
Great work!
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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It seems we're at our best when we're outside.
I know for me, it makes my juices flow.
It yields that place to let our problems glide, ... Ya know, Tom.
I may have a dirty mind, but I couldn't help but notice the sexual references here.
Of course, I'm not gonna touch that topic with a ten foot pole, heh-heh.
In all seriousness, I get the fact that this was about competition rowing.
It is a very nice, well composed Sestina, indeed.
This photograph was taken by the
Great work!
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Thank you Dean. Thats a new perspective! Ill fix that sprag, thanks,
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My perspectives are always a little bit "off the wall", Tom, heh-heh.
You're more than welcome, my friend. it's an excellent poem.
~Dean
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your Sestina Sonnet. This form was new to me, so interesting. It flowed well and you followed the rules. Also you had a good message and photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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I enjoyed reading your Sestina Sonnet. This form was new to me, so interesting. It flowed well and you followed the rules. Also you had a good message and photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Thank you Marybell1
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
