Never Sound Retreat
A very hard fight47 total reviews
Comment from Beri Bee
This is a very stirring poem. I can hardly imagine what that must have felt like, or what it ever must feel like to be training to go to war. This is a very lovely poem. Respect!
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This is a very stirring poem. I can hardly imagine what that must have felt like, or what it ever must feel like to be training to go to war. This is a very lovely poem. Respect!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
Comment from Possummagic
This is a lovely poem dedicated to your son and his achievements in life. Be that at school or in his military career, you wish your son well. Nicely paced, well rhymed. Blessings to you. PM
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This is a lovely poem dedicated to your son and his achievements in life. Be that at school or in his military career, you wish your son well. Nicely paced, well rhymed. Blessings to you. PM
Comment Written 04-May-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Never Sound Retreat, hearkens back to the days of uncertainty in the sixties and entry from childhood into adulthood in the wink of an eye.
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This poem, Never Sound Retreat, hearkens back to the days of uncertainty in the sixties and entry from childhood into adulthood in the wink of an eye.
Comment Written 04-May-2019
Comment from Gypsymooncat
If not for the encouragement depicted in your poem, I'd say your son would've always struggled. I enjoyed this offering, and felt the dedication of father to son keenly. Well said! xoxo
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If not for the encouragement depicted in your poem, I'd say your son would've always struggled. I enjoyed this offering, and felt the dedication of father to son keenly. Well said! xoxo
Comment Written 04-May-2019
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the inspirational faith filled message that this poem conveys. We can do all things through Christ! An unseen hand was bringing him through. I've enjoyed yet another well written work from you Jaybird. Well done! Keep them coming!
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I love the inspirational faith filled message that this poem conveys. We can do all things through Christ! An unseen hand was bringing him through. I've enjoyed yet another well written work from you Jaybird. Well done! Keep them coming!
Comment Written 04-May-2019
Comment from phil nelson
when I saw the year I thought immediately of Vietnam, and then I read your notes--I pray that your son survived the war without scars--your poem is uplifting and has the pride of someone who has himself faced combat. Very enjoyable thank you!
All the Best!
Phil
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when I saw the year I thought immediately of Vietnam, and then I read your notes--I pray that your son survived the war without scars--your poem is uplifting and has the pride of someone who has himself faced combat. Very enjoyable thank you!
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 04-May-2019
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great poem in tribute to your son, Jay. It reads smoothly with a great message. Great job with the rhymes and your words of support. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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This is a great poem in tribute to your son, Jay. It reads smoothly with a great message. Great job with the rhymes and your words of support. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 04-May-2019
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a commanding write in both message and stark presentation, chronicalled in true philosophical fashion, in distinct and wise counsel, for a beloved son - smoothly delivered in rhyming rhythm...
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In my opinion, a commanding write in both message and stark presentation, chronicalled in true philosophical fashion, in distinct and wise counsel, for a beloved son - smoothly delivered in rhyming rhythm...
Comment Written 04-May-2019
Comment from jenintorre
This is a beautifully written poem containing excellent advice. I hope it was taken.
Superb rhyme and rhythm. I so enjoyed reading another one of your wonderful poems. Take care. Jen.
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This is a beautifully written poem containing excellent advice. I hope it was taken.
Superb rhyme and rhythm. I so enjoyed reading another one of your wonderful poems. Take care. Jen.
Comment Written 04-May-2019
Comment from misscookie
I can't tell by your pen if you came home okay
but one thing I know is you love him with all your heart
I can tell how proud your of him with every word you write
T Hank you for sharing this lovely poem
Cookie
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I can't tell by your pen if you came home okay
but one thing I know is you love him with all your heart
I can tell how proud your of him with every word you write
T Hank you for sharing this lovely poem
Cookie
Comment Written 04-May-2019
