Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written heartfelt poem. It us not always an easy task to visit our loved one's last resting place. We keep doing itbin honor of them and the life and love we shared until we meet again one day.

 Comment Written 11-May-2017

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reply by the author on 11-May-2017

Thanks so much, Sandra. JoAnn

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

Your imagery both physical and emotional runs deep through your words and heart... a wonderful job describing this sacred place and the seasons that pass and come again. The passage of time, yet some things remain. You've done a beautiful job writing about this. Blessings, AmyJo

* (auto correct interference) second paragraph says "ties", but thing you intended "tires"

 Comment Written 11-May-2017

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reply by the author on 11-May-2017

I thank you so much for this lovely review and especially for this useful correction.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

Your descriptions gave away the place long before you named it. *smile* A lovely, but sad, reminiscence. I appreciate your honest way of speaking about it and wish you the best of luck in the contest!

One note:
1.) The gravel crunches under my (tires) and

Thanks!



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 Comment Written 11-May-2017

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reply by the author on 11-May-2017

Thanks so much for reading and this needed correction.