Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

This was very musical. The beat and rhyme were great--I read it out loud. :D My cat was very amused but wants to eat instead.
I was going to wish you luck in the contest--thought it was a competition.

 Comment Written 11-May-2017

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reply by the author on 11-May-2017

Thanks much amd I'm glad it didn't scare the cat!-LOL

reply by Rasmine on 11-May-2017

LOL!

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

This may sound intentionally like the bad dream of a nubile teen. Things have changed and perhaps the age of the mystery man here is actually quite young. It
amazes me whats up these days with them. The rhymes are apt and the story
has a clear line. The ending seems a bit fuzzy.

 Comment Written 11-May-2017

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reply by the author on 11-May-2017

Thanks so much for reading. The end was left as sort of a mystery. Appreciate the review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

How rain could influence and motivate, change one's mind to feel about the evils to profession and living; however, mystery resolved, metaphoric effect detected; I liked and enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 10-May-2017

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reply by the author on 11-May-2017

Thanks much for reading.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Exceptional

Hi (*<*)

= Awesome take on this photo,
= A person can come up with many stories on this one.
= You did a good job of keeping the formatting simple, but very effective.
= Nice job. Love to give this sixer. (*<*)

Cheers ... Jax / Jackie (*<*)

 Comment Written 10-May-2017

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reply by the author on 10-May-2017

I am very grateful for this fine review with my favorite frog green star.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi frogbook,

I think you do a great job in writing this type of poem. Every once in awhile you should write something sweet to read too. It would be fun
to read what they are like.

Kat

 Comment Written 09-May-2017

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reply by the author on 09-May-2017

Thanks my friend. I know you are not a fan of the scary ones.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Hah! He met his match. Good thing for his next victim, the blonde, very engrossing story poem, the morale being 'no one is invincible!' Loved this, quite entertaining, blessings...

 Comment Written 09-May-2017

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reply by the author on 09-May-2017

Thanks so much. Nice to hear from you.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Good take on this.
I saw the other by Jax, and it sounds fun to do. Yes, I can imagine the different scenarios. Good to see your take on it.
Love the ending with rain in eyes because it poses the question...alive or dead...even dying.
Well done.
Have a great day.
RG

 Comment Written 09-May-2017

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reply by the author on 09-May-2017

Thanks so much for reading and your thoughtful review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is quite the horror poem. It takes use into the mind of what none of us can understand -- why a demented person wants to kill another human. Well done and well, quite horrifying!

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

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reply by the author on 09-May-2017

I enjoy the horror genre so just had to do it! Ha. Thanks so much for reading and your thoughtful review.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Wow, JoAnn. I did not know you had this talent for the macabre in you. LOL Very well done from start to finish. the meter is a bit off here and there but the basic poetry is solid writing. Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

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reply by the author on 08-May-2017

Thanks for reading, Bob. I actually like writing the scary ones but have branched out a bit on the site. A good thing, I think. Don't want to scare everyone off-haha. Much appreciate the review. Meter is always my enemy.

Comment from planetjanet

Excellent

I love how simple and sinister it is. It tells a rhythmic story, delightfully entertaining.
Some phrasing felt a little clunky (just a flash in the cab's headlight beam?) and the comma in the 8th line seems like a grammar error ('that' might suffice).
It is practically perfect, simple and sinister, a delightfully dark work of art. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

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reply by the author on 08-May-2017

Thanks so much. I really appreciate you reading and your helpful and kind comments.