Tribute to Our Lady of Fatima
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Annunciation to Coronation"Marian poems
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Comment from loismddavis
This is a very old and well known story to which you did not add anything new--or a new way of viewing it. In the first stanza your lines would read better
Bore a savior
within her...
"they" found no room
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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This is a very old and well known story to which you did not add anything new--or a new way of viewing it. In the first stanza your lines would read better
Bore a savior
within her...
"they" found no room
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Dear lois, Thank you for your review and for catching the typo. Dove
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Easter has come and gone, yet still, you're worshipping. That'a not what we do in America is it? It's just what we should do.
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Easter has come and gone, yet still, you're worshipping. That'a not what we do in America is it? It's just what we should do.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Dear Thomas, Thank you for your review. Dove
