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Comment from ~Dovey
Hey Mikey:
At least that door didn't have fire behind it! (Did he check it first?) You've done a great build up through all of the segments and I thought that your dialogue was plausible.
There wasn't much in the way of stage direction to be had in this piece, but other than some mist, what else was there?
Nice job on the conclusion and relating it to the prose potlatch growth topics.
Kim
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Hey Mikey:
At least that door didn't have fire behind it! (Did he check it first?) You've done a great build up through all of the segments and I thought that your dialogue was plausible.
There wasn't much in the way of stage direction to be had in this piece, but other than some mist, what else was there?
Nice job on the conclusion and relating it to the prose potlatch growth topics.
Kim
Comment Written 14-May-2017
Comment from Rasmine
Hello,
Good play.
I really liked this sentence: These are the questions drinking the finest Tasmanian Devil Ale in his brain. The feeling is love. Love is everywhere, inside and out (my beliefs, too).
TC
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Hello,
Good play.
I really liked this sentence: These are the questions drinking the finest Tasmanian Devil Ale in his brain. The feeling is love. Love is everywhere, inside and out (my beliefs, too).
TC
Comment Written 10-May-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
If the fun piece all right, and a little bit crazy but what would you expect from our Mikey! In the end you had quite a serious message and very subtle, to pass on with your play. It was well done, and I hope you have success with it, Giddy
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If the fun piece all right, and a little bit crazy but what would you expect from our Mikey! In the end you had quite a serious message and very subtle, to pass on with your play. It was well done, and I hope you have success with it, Giddy
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this story/script. I don't have any suggestions. Your talent signs through loud and clear. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed reading this story/script. I don't have any suggestions. Your talent signs through loud and clear. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from lalajovanoski
this was amazing. I must stay tuned! this has really good dialogue throughout and has a lot of emotions that are felt. thank you for sharing this
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this was amazing. I must stay tuned! this has really good dialogue throughout and has a lot of emotions that are felt. thank you for sharing this
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Michael, this is an outstanding script. Love is all there is. Love is the answer. That is what I believe too. Awesomeness. Well done, my friend.
Gypsy
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Hello, Michael, this is an outstanding script. Love is all there is. Love is the answer. That is what I believe too. Awesomeness. Well done, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from apky
I'll first confess that I'm not a script writer at all.
But I do enjoy reading script and toying with the idea of trying it out some day.
This is the second or third of this script that I've read. That says I do like the dream world vs. real world theme. I think you put it down well, and where I stumble, it is probably just me trying to hard to learn the ropes from you.
Apky
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I'll first confess that I'm not a script writer at all.
But I do enjoy reading script and toying with the idea of trying it out some day.
This is the second or third of this script that I've read. That says I do like the dream world vs. real world theme. I think you put it down well, and where I stumble, it is probably just me trying to hard to learn the ropes from you.
Apky
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I found myself trying to analyze this as I was reading then decided to forget that and just enjoy, so I did, and I did. Well done with this series mikey, I want to ask did you learn anything about yourself you didn't know before, but that's probably being analytical again LOL
cheers,
valda
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I found myself trying to analyze this as I was reading then decided to forget that and just enjoy, so I did, and I did. Well done with this series mikey, I want to ask did you learn anything about yourself you didn't know before, but that's probably being analytical again LOL
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from frierajac
The theme of dream after death reminds me of the Divine Comedy
Although it doesn't seem romantic, and so far there is no counterpart to Beatrice. who is one of history's most romantic figures.
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The theme of dream after death reminds me of the Divine Comedy
Although it doesn't seem romantic, and so far there is no counterpart to Beatrice. who is one of history's most romantic figures.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written script scene. We are making mistakes in our life, we are not perfect after all, we can only try our best to what life throws at us, when we stay true and honest to ourselves we stand a chance to end up well.
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A very well-written script scene. We are making mistakes in our life, we are not perfect after all, we can only try our best to what life throws at us, when we stay true and honest to ourselves we stand a chance to end up well.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
