Your Divine Embrace
just poem from one's heart21 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Nice poem of longing to be in the arms of the one you love. I did enjoy the read and liked the rhyming of the un-metered work. Many blessings for the coming week. Patricia
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Nice poem of longing to be in the arms of the one you love. I did enjoy the read and liked the rhyming of the un-metered work. Many blessings for the coming week. Patricia
Comment Written 07-May-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend,
A very romantic poem, I like it a lot. It flowed well except in this stanza...
my love implores join me on a magical moonbeam
tis your caress that roused my fretful rest
I will search the stars in my final quest
for a place our hearts to live together in a beautiful dream
I suggest... a place for our hearts to live a sweet dream
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Hello my friend,
A very romantic poem, I like it a lot. It flowed well except in this stanza...
my love implores join me on a magical moonbeam
tis your caress that roused my fretful rest
I will search the stars in my final quest
for a place our hearts to live together in a beautiful dream
I suggest... a place for our hearts to live a sweet dream
Comment Written 07-May-2017
Comment from Irish Rain
This is lovely Mr. Jim, and the artwork you chose is perfect. 'when passions conquer any foolish pride'...a beautiful line. I think you're computer goofed on line 8...is it supposed to be facade? Your computer put symbols in. Just beautiful, blessings..
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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This is lovely Mr. Jim, and the artwork you chose is perfect. 'when passions conquer any foolish pride'...a beautiful line. I think you're computer goofed on line 8...is it supposed to be facade? Your computer put symbols in. Just beautiful, blessings..
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Irish, I changed that typo. It seems that this tablet has a mind of its own. Thank you for this excellent review and comments. I like that line also! Have a great evening my friend,,,,,,,Jim
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I think a lot of them do that! Not a problem!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful poem, fabulously rhymed with great flow and resonating sentiments, a joy to read and so romantic, love can make the pen flow with poignant words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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A beautiful poem, fabulously rhymed with great flow and resonating sentiments, a joy to read and so romantic, love can make the pen flow with poignant words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Dolly, thank you for your most excellent review and your wonderful comments. This review is very much appreciated my friend,,,,,,Jim
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Cuddling with the right person is the best and can cure any bad day. I don't know what it's like for the man to be the protector but I do like feeling protected. Great job with this
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Cuddling with the right person is the best and can cure any bad day. I don't know what it's like for the man to be the protector but I do like feeling protected. Great job with this
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Many thanks for your great review and wonderful comments. They are much appreciated my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm a feel good guy, who always enjoys reading anything that ends with a feel-good ending. Real or make believe, if it puts a smile on my face, I'm happy. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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I'm a feel good guy, who always enjoys reading anything that ends with a feel-good ending. Real or make believe, if it puts a smile on my face, I'm happy. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Ric, thank you for your excellent review and truly great comments. You always support my work for which I am very appreciative my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from F. Wehr3
I really enjoyed the poem, Jim. I thought it was expressive and emotional. Hold on to that one!
fa�§ade--I don't know if this can be corrected?
tis--should be 'tis, a contraction for it is.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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I really enjoyed the poem, Jim. I thought it was expressive and emotional. Hold on to that one!
fa�§ade--I don't know if this can be corrected?
tis--should be 'tis, a contraction for it is.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Russell, thank you for this excellent review and comments. I will fix my error, thanks for the catch my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem filled with dreams and desires to hold your loved one close to you, where you can comfort her in your arms the whole night long.
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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A very well-written love poem filled with dreams and desires to hold your loved one close to you, where you can comfort her in your arms the whole night long.
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Sandra, thank you for this excellent review and great comments. I appreciate them and your support my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Knock it off Jim. My wife's getting suspicious.
You don't mind if I copy this and give it to her, do you? We've got an anniversary coming up and this will get me out of the dog house.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Knock it off Jim. My wife's getting suspicious.
You don't mind if I copy this and give it to her, do you? We've got an anniversary coming up and this will get me out of the dog house.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Thomas thank you for your excellent review and comments. It is all yours my friend, maybe she will say, Thomas this is nice and thank you my honey! Thanks again my friend,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Ulla
Awe Jim, your love shines through with such fervour that you had me almost in tears. It's beautiful, and I think I know who you're thinking of.
Just a minor thing: I think you need to write a simple 'facade'. FS cannot cope with the proper spelling.
I'll go back and read it yet again. All the beast. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Awe Jim, your love shines through with such fervour that you had me almost in tears. It's beautiful, and I think I know who you're thinking of.
Just a minor thing: I think you need to write a simple 'facade'. FS cannot cope with the proper spelling.
I'll go back and read it yet again. All the beast. Ulla:))
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Ulla, thank you ever so much for this exceptional six star review. Your support of my works is very much appreciated. You always make me feel that my poems are very worthy. Do you think you know who she is. Just initials. Take care my friend,,,,,,,,,Jim
