My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Over one thing"a collection of my poetry
69 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Sometimes, that's all it takes, "Over One thing".
Excellent nonet poem Patty.
I liked the fun artwork you chose.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Sometimes, that's all it takes, "Over One thing".
Excellent nonet poem Patty.
I liked the fun artwork you chose.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi Janet; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your good wishes and comments,
~patty~
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I rather like the nonet style - and
you've made a good job of it, Patty -
a great entry for the contest.
I wish you good luck, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I rather like the nonet style - and
you've made a good job of it, Patty -
a great entry for the contest.
I wish you good luck, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi Margaret; thank you so much for your kind words and luck. This really was a fun poetic form to work with,
~patty~
Comment from robyn corum
Patty,
It's unclear to me who's standing on principle - her or him? *smile* Either way, pride seems to be getting in the way of this particular love story. Hope it works out! hahaha! Good luck!
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Patty,
It's unclear to me who's standing on principle - her or him? *smile* Either way, pride seems to be getting in the way of this particular love story. Hope it works out! hahaha! Good luck!
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. The her or him is up to the reader - are you he or she? I appreciate your warm comments and stars,
~patty~
Comment from SweetStreet00
A very poignant poem, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. The artwork you chose fits perfectly with the theme of lost love. Overall, just a fantastic job!
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A very poignant poem, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. The artwork you chose fits perfectly with the theme of lost love. Overall, just a fantastic job!
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and I appreciate the six stars,
~patty~
Comment from dmt1967
This poem is easily recognise to anyone who has fallen in love and made a mistake. I liked the picture and found both picture and poem told a story. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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This poem is easily recognise to anyone who has fallen in love and made a mistake. I liked the picture and found both picture and poem told a story. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you so much for your warm review. This poem was a pleasure to write - though the poetic form was more difficult than I thought! I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think when we are in the thick of an argument, we never think of the consequences, but rather our point of view, and when the argument is over, we analyse and wonder whether it was all worth it. The people we know, love and care about are our comfort in this big scary world. I love the layout of your poem and its sentiments are real and straight from the heart Patty, love Dolly x
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I think when we are in the thick of an argument, we never think of the consequences, but rather our point of view, and when the argument is over, we analyse and wonder whether it was all worth it. The people we know, love and care about are our comfort in this big scary world. I love the layout of your poem and its sentiments are real and straight from the heart Patty, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review of this poem. I appreciate your comments and seeing your interpretation of the piece,
~patty~
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
You said it well. A breakup is traumatic. It changes lives and often effects last for years. The rejected waste time and effort trying to get a lover to return, but that won't happen, because boredom set in and the ex-lover feels only annoyance at begging. When it was over "one little thing" it's probably NOT that...just the final straw.
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You said it well. A breakup is traumatic. It changes lives and often effects last for years. The rejected waste time and effort trying to get a lover to return, but that won't happen, because boredom set in and the ex-lover feels only annoyance at begging. When it was over "one little thing" it's probably NOT that...just the final straw.
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Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this poem. It is too bad how much time is wasted on a love that is gone.
~patty~
Comment from DLBoo
Wonderful job. A great example of nonet poetry.
Can't find a thing wrong with it so, six stars it is.
Two poems in two days, I don't know what to think. WOW!
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Wonderful job. A great example of nonet poetry.
Can't find a thing wrong with it so, six stars it is.
Two poems in two days, I don't know what to think. WOW!
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you SO much for this wonderful review. I enjoyed writing in this poetic form, though it was challenging. I appreciate that you saw my effort,
~patty~
Comment from Teri7
Patty, This is a really great Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. I like the art work you chose and you used very good wording. Best wishes in the contest. That is a really nice picture of yourself on here. love, Teri
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reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Patty, This is a really great Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. I like the art work you chose and you used very good wording. Best wishes in the contest. That is a really nice picture of yourself on here. love, Teri
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Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi Teri; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review this poem. I'm thankful you saw its merits. (Thank you for the compliment on my picture, too.)
~patty~
