Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I love your little lune and the picture you've chosen to go with it.
Dogs are great companions and love without expecting anything in return.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

thank you for your kind review. My dogs are a great joy to me,
~patty~

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Awww!!! BIG AWWW!!!! Hello little doggies, aren't you both so precious!!!A happy, lovely, LOVING Lune!! A cheery note this Tuesday! Blessings....

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Karyn; thank you for your warm review - hope you have a good day, too.
~patty~

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

cute little line poem of puppies to just say hello and the photo was adorable and i felt these little guys sure have a lot of love to give. a well penned poem and it was a pleasure to read your work

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your time and comments,
~patty~

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Puppy love is fun
Great big hearts
Giving forever

We don't have a pet right now but I can definitely identify with the sentiment.
Puppies and puppy love is fun..

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Janet; thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

Comment from DLBoo

Excellent

Such cuties. It qualifies as a Lune that's for sure. Good job. Not used to reading something so short from you. Can't wait to read your next piece. Great job, well done.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

LOL! It is indeed a rarity for me to be so brief. I have problems with these short poetic forms. It just feels like there isn't enough syllables to properly tell a story. Thank you for reading,
~patty~

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Your Lune is pleasant and pretty. You know that I love to see your puppies. They are so adorable and precious. I also did not know what a Lune is. So thank you for this education. I am still learning. PERFECT...

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

thank you for reading this little poem. My dogs are one of the best things in my life,
~patty~

Comment from Vijay Kumar V

Excellent

This is so real, "Great big hearts
Giving forever". And I love the title like it's dedicated to the dogs. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day. Namaskaram

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi; thank you so much for your time to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~

Comment from melyuki

Excellent

Hi Patty, just love your doggy poems. this one is no exception.. full of warmth and that fuzzy feeling you get being around dogs. the picture sets the scene perfectly and the last line in your lune poem says it all. ' giving forever'... got to love our dogs .... thanks for the beautifully refreshing ride. . happy smiles to you ,mel xxx

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Mel; thank you so much for your time to read and review. My dogs are one of the ways that I get through each day; another is to write,
~patty~

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I look up and I see God, I look down and see my dog.
Simple spelling G O D, same word backwards, D O G.
They would stay with me all day. I'm the one who walks away.
But both of them just wait for me, and dance at my return with glee.

Both love me no matter what - divine God and canine mutt.
I take it hard each time I fail, but God forgives, dog wags his tail.
God thought up and made the dog, dog reflects a part of God.
I've seen love from both sides now, it's everywhere, amen, bow wow.

I look up and I see God, I look down and see my dog.
And in my human frailty...I can't match their love for me.~Wendy Francisco

Cute lune, Patty...

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Dean; thank you so much for sharing Wendy Francisco's poem with me. I remember reading that one a long time ago, and its nice to have those words with me now. I appreciate your time to read and review,
~patty~

reply by Dean Kuch on 02-May-2017

My pleasure.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A dog is a master of unconditional love. This is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi; I so appreciate your time to read, review, and comment. Your words of encouragement are greatly appreciated,
~patty~