Comment from doggymad

Excellent

You have siad it all in this cute Lune poem. Love the picture of the babies. Dogs in particular seem to be capable of everlasting love and adoration.

Mind you if you want privacy in the bathroom, perhaps a cat would be better lol
hugs
Freda

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Freda; you know I've had cats who felt it was their job to follow me everywhere too. Sometimes I tell the boys that are really just cats in dog costumes. Bernie just wags his tail and looks at me slyly,
~patty~

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear Patty, Cute, lovable picture. I guess that you have dogs. I grew up with dogs, then I had cats when I lived on my own. I think I'll try a "lune" poem.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review. Yes, I have dogs - though I had cats for most of my life. I think we all 'switch sides' at some point or another,
~patty~

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Puppies are like children--their time in that stage is brief and therefore the invitation to enjoy them is more urgent and more for our own joy. Your poem captures the joy of puppies.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

thank you so much for reading and commenting on my little poem. Yes, dogs only get to share a portion of our lives with us, but they make it so much sweeter,
~patty~

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

First of all, thank you for teaching me what a lune is. Next, I really like your cute puppy poem. I am guessing that those two adorable dogs are yours. Well done. They look very happy.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Nancy; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement - as far as teaching you about a new poetic form - I have to thank www.shadowpoetry.com for the information.
~patty~

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Dogs are such giving creatures Patty, and Bernie and Howie look adorable.
A lovely Lune telling the magic of these puppies
Have a lovely evening
Mitchell

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Mitchell; thank you for your time to read and review this poem. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. Enjoy the rest of your day,
~patty~

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Patty,

What a great job you've done with this little lune about your dogs. The picture is adorable and I am sure that Bernie and Howie get tons of love. Puppy love is one of the best kinds! :) Your syllables are all correct for the lune form. Thank you for sharing.

Kim

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Kim; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The one on the right as we look at them reminds me of a cartoon drawing of a hedgehoo that I once saw. Normally I tell people they should flush these lunes left or right to obtain the crescent shape from whiche the form gets its name, but that wouldn't work here.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Jim, thank you for stopping by to read and review. I can appreciate what you said about flushing either left or right - I tried and neither one looked right.
~patty~

Comment from nuthead

Excellent

Is that a picture of your lovely dogs, Bernie and Howie? Awww...they are adorable.
The dogs just had to say hello... well, Hello! back. Woof! :)

Your loon poem follows the simple 5-3-5 syllable requirements. The sentiment is spot on. Pets, especially dogs, are givers.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Shirley - that is indeed Bernie and Howie right after a good grooming. I passed along the greeting. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Lune to let the dogs greet us, and give us some puppy love with their great big hearts. There love last lifelong directly from their souls.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

This is a sweet poem.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem.
The background color blends in well with the image.
--The two puppies are so cute and adorable under the cover together.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Nicole; thank you for your time to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~