Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

How adorable.
They look right at home inside that blankey.
Great poem in the style of a lune.
I learn so much about poetry when reading your work.
Lovely work!
Michael

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

Hi Michael; thank you so much for your review of this little poem. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good afternoon, Patty

Yes, one feels a special love, a bond with puppies. Their innocence, the fact they see everyday as Christmas makes them special (read the latter part from a book on dog psychology. Enjoyed.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

PS: Forgot to thank you for serving!

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

Hi Ray; thank you so much. Serving was my pleasure - and my stories and poems about the dogs are a great treasure for me to write.
~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes, my friend, this is well written having pets as part of a family is rewarding for everyone they are truly man's best friend sorry I am behind playing catch up regards Jill

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

Hey Jill; I don't mind if you're playing 'catch up,' I simply appreciate you taking the time to read and review my posts.
~patty~

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

I feel your statement. Innocence having no responsibility or cares to consider does make big hearts. Nice way to convey such a feeling, in my opinion of this write.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your opinion of this piece of poetry.
~patty~

Comment from Joycee

Exceptional

Puppy love is fun and enjoyable because there is no judging for anyone. Animals are great that way. They love us for being in their lives and asking only for love.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

thank you so much for your time to read and review this piece. Bernie and Howie certainly make my days and you're right - all they ask for is love (and my pillow.) LOL!
~patty~

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A beautiful feel good write, puppies are such fun and give us so much pleasure from their 'Great big hearts', a fabulous write Patty, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

Hi Dolly; thank you so much for the warm review. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal,
~patty~

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Puppy love is fun
Great big hearts
Giving forever

such a simple little poem, but the words speaks volumes and the picture is so adorable - I want one ... please.

Margaret

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

Hi Margaret; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. Your comments on my poem make me smile - but No, you cannot have either Bernie or Howie! (LOL!)
~patty~

reply by Margaret Snowdon on 03-May-2017

That's not fair - you have two and I've none at all. Can I just borrow one then?

reply by the author on 03-May-2017

hmmm - which do you want? The one that has a funny little growl when he plays OR the one that follows you everywhere you go?

reply by Margaret Snowdon on 03-May-2017

Both

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I love the picture and the way you have matched their blanket to the background colour, very cleverly done. I liked the font used as well as the wording of this delightful little poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. I'm glad you liked it and appreciate you noticing that the blanket matched the background - I had fun working with the color wheel!
~patty~

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Patty - this is a lovely Lune poem. Correct in structure, 5/3/5, and the words are so true, especially 'great big hearts'. Friends that will never let you down. Loved this. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

Hi Dorothy; thank you so much for your lovely review of this piece. I appreciate your kind words and comments,
~patty~

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

You not wrong there.
Lovely happy smiley piece of poetry.
3 5 3 is very much to the point and precise.
Good work.
Luck to you in contest
Have a smiley day

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece,
~patty~