Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Adorable little faces peeking out of the quilt. They do give love forever. Thank God for that. When we're down in the dumps they're there for us--the good times, too. Well thought out Lune that capture the essence of doggie devotion. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017

Hi Marilyn; thank you for going back and reading this little piece about Howie and Bernie. I need to write another poem - its been awhile,

~patty~

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

Aww, such a wonderful and lovely short poem. I truly agree with what you have said, they most definitely have big hearts and will love you forever. They really make the best best friends.

 Comment Written 06-May-2017

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reply by the author on 06-May-2017

Hi Chloe; thank you so much for reading this poem about Howie and Bernie. They truly are two of my very best friends,
~patty~

Comment from Patricia Crandall

Excellent

Are they your adorable dogs? They steal the poem. Puppy (small) hearts (large). You have created an excellent poem with so few descriptive words. I would recommend it.

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

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reply by the author on 05-May-2017

Hi; thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you stopped by to read and review. Your comments are greatly appreciated,
~patty~
The dogs in the photo are mine; Bernie on the left and Howie on the right.

Comment from LucaFen4

Excellent

Very cute poem. I have to playfully disagree that puppies are always giving. Talk to me after you come home to eaten underwear, or chewed up cushions. Thick and thin, we love them still.

4yrs old, mine's still a giant pup.

I enjoyed, cheers

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

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reply by the author on 05-May-2017

Hi; thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you stopped by to read and review. Your comments are greatly appreciated,
~patty~

Comment from Joseph W. Sestrich

Excellent

This poem deserves a Bow....Wow. It is a good thing humans have gone to the dogs. Dogs seem to embody attributes most people would be enriched by if they too were so gifted. Here's a paws up and a tail wag for this creation of yours. This poem is sure get petted by many.

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

thank you very much for the lovely review. I couldn't agree more - if more people thought like dogs, the world would be a better place,
~patty~

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

As I often say I dont could the syllables I just enjoy the words. This is lovely makes me want to get another pup, I have three dogs! The picture enhances your poem, dogs do give their love forever. MaggieF

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Hi Maggie; thank you for stopping by to read and review. This whole syllable counting thing has really gotten me! I sit here and count on my fingers as I write - my hubby thinks its hilarious!
~patty~

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Double the joy when you have a pair of puppies. They look quite adorable in your picture of them. You have expressed your love for them well in this short poem.

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

thank you so much for your review of this lune about the dogs. The picture was snapped at one of the few times both of them were looking up, still, and willing to sit next to the other,
~patty~

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, a charming write, the message warmly presented in its description of man's best friend - it defines puppies succinctly and suggests firsthand knowledge of the puppy experience - in full compliance with the prompt...

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

reply by evesayshi on 04-May-2017

You are most welcome, Patty - who wouldn't love such a winning poem...Eve

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a very nice little poem. Everyone loves puppies, and I especially like the image of great big hearts giving forever. Thanks for sharing and have a great day

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review. I will tell the dogs you like the image of their hearts - that will make them turn their heads funny,
~patty~

Comment from XGoneX

Excellent

Hi,
Thank you for the notes as I am not familiar with most rules when it comes to poetry formats and rules. I have written may poems, but they are all free verse.

Puppy love is fun
Great big hearts
Giving forever

This poem is heartwarming and has a good alliteration. Always loved alliteration in poetry. That I do.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 03-May-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I am having such a good time learning all of these new poetic formats. I usually write free verse, but this has been a new challenge,
~patty~