Together
song-title poem contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good use of the song titles in this short love poem. I think the second line is too long. You don't really need "and I thought" The first two lines could be separate sentences. Line 2 could read The sweetest thing I knew was loving you.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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This is a good use of the song titles in this short love poem. I think the second line is too long. You don't really need "and I thought" The first two lines could be separate sentences. Line 2 could read The sweetest thing I knew was loving you.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Dear dragonpoet, Thank you for your review and your suggestions. Dove
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You're welcome. Hope I helped.
Joan
Comment from SeanFox16
This is a great contest entry. I can make out 6 song titles in it but there are probably much more. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this lovely piece of writing.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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This is a great contest entry. I can make out 6 song titles in it but there are probably much more. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this lovely piece of writing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Dear SeanFox, Thank you for your review. Dove
