Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I like this loop form and you did very well with it. Love reading poems of faith:) Well done and good luck in the contest.

~~Teresa~~

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

thank you for reading and reviewing, Teresa. I appreciate your time and warm words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Patty,
This is super. I love the way you customized your poem--that makes it truly stand out. The rhymes are awesome as is the message. The repeated word fits in seamlessly. Your message is awesome, too. Love the image. You did a fine job. Thanks for sharing & caring. Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Jan; thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Patty,

The arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. Flowing very nicely. Comprehensible and very professionally written.

I saw no SPAG and no typos. It was very clean.

The words you chose worked well.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Hi Camille;
thank you! I'm glad you liked the poem. It was fun to write this one,
~patty~

reply by Oatmeal on 28-Apr-2017

Patty,

You are welcome.

Love you,

Camille

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"The Good News" is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-up-lifting piece, This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. The art work accompanying this piece is truly inspiring. Sadly, I'm out of sixes.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I will take a virtual six any day. I'm just glad that my work had meaning for you. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 28-Apr-2017

~patty~, it was indeed a pleasure to read and review your work. It was a definite six.
KEEP WRITING!

Best wishes, the Duchess

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an excellent poem and read, to embrace faith with such emotion, the last four lines are powerful and with meaning well done, good luck in your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your encouraging words. This was a poem for the love of Him, and I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Patty this is a wonderful loop poem, the picture of Jesus is amazing, What eyes, beautiful, This entire write. Good luck ~Kerry

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your encouraging words. This was a poem for the love of Him, and I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from Mariana Frias

Exceptional

Masterfully done. I love your religious writing. It is a good teaching. Be good and praise God,s word because doing good deeds and following God or the righteous path is what will give us a nice place to go after this life.

Mariana

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind encouraging words. The shiny six stars were just icing on the cake,
~patty~

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Patty This is a lovely loop poem and you have done it justice with your well chosed meaninful words. The words flow evenly and carry the meaning it was meant too Good luck in the contest Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your encouraging words. This was a poem for the love of Him, and I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from fafa

Exceptional

I like this form of poetry, your work is really good. It expires with the premise of the poems with this style and has very good image accompanying, congratulations and very happy day

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017

Hi fafa; thank you so much for the lovely review and EXCEPTIONAL rating. I wrote this poem for Him and I'm so glad it has been well received on the site,
~patty~

Comment from mountainwriter49

Excellent

Good Evening, Patty,

I enjoyed your poem of faith. Your words ring true and meaningful.

I've not written a loop poem. They can't be easy given the repetitive words. It appears you've done well with it.

Good luck to you in the contest.

Ray

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017

Hi Ray; thank you for your thoughtful review,
~patty~