My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "The Good News"a collection of my poetry
56 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
This inspiring poem is a painless reminder that it is the duty of each believer to try to reach the ears and hearts of non believers everywhere just as Jesus and his Apostles did so many years ago. Of course the message will fall upon many deaf ears and hardened hearts, but the message and the effort must still go forth. Good job.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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This inspiring poem is a painless reminder that it is the duty of each believer to try to reach the ears and hearts of non believers everywhere just as Jesus and his Apostles did so many years ago. Of course the message will fall upon many deaf ears and hardened hearts, but the message and the effort must still go forth. Good job.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for your time to read and review. You have heard my message through my words - we, as believers, must strive to spread His word. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal to me,
~patty~
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The words of your great poem spur me to do more to help spread the word.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Great commission to Good News, mark and sign to Good Friday, for embracing of His love given free from sin, praise Him the true Saviour, speak soft like Him; this influences and inspires for good living per His Grace.
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Great commission to Good News, mark and sign to Good Friday, for embracing of His love given free from sin, praise Him the true Saviour, speak soft like Him; this influences and inspires for good living per His Grace.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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thank you
Comment from BluZiggy
Nice loop poem...not easy. Your praise of our Lord is heartfelt and appreciated, especially now. I like the way your main character recognizes the job she/he has to do "Spread the good news" and "Praise" and then, "His voice speaks soft and gentle" and then back to an instruction, "Embrace His Love". Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
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Nice loop poem...not easy. Your praise of our Lord is heartfelt and appreciated, especially now. I like the way your main character recognizes the job she/he has to do "Spread the good news" and "Praise" and then, "His voice speaks soft and gentle" and then back to an instruction, "Embrace His Love". Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Hi; thank you so much for your time to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~
Comment from Hitcher
A loop poem, it looks like quite a tricky form to me, repeating the same last word of each line on the next line and making it your first word. Not easy to pull off and keep it flowing... I think you managed it very well friend, well done!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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A loop poem, it looks like quite a tricky form to me, repeating the same last word of each line on the next line and making it your first word. Not easy to pull off and keep it flowing... I think you managed it very well friend, well done!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for your warm review of this poem. It was a bit tricky to put together, but I was thrilled with the result. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from XGoneX
You're not only good writing prose but also poetry. this poem flows very nice and has very very gentle, beautiful words. Your Love for God shown in these lines is a must. I'm not religious, but I'm very spiritual.
His voice speaks soft and gentle,
Gentle is His warm embrace,
Embrace His love, given free,
Free from sin, without a trace. -- beautiful verse.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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You're not only good writing prose but also poetry. this poem flows very nice and has very very gentle, beautiful words. Your Love for God shown in these lines is a must. I'm not religious, but I'm very spiritual.
His voice speaks soft and gentle,
Gentle is His warm embrace,
Embrace His love, given free,
Free from sin, without a trace. -- beautiful verse.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Hi; thank you so much for your warm review of this work. I'm not religious either - I haven't set foot in a church for over fifteen years. My love of Christ is something I try to reflect within my actions and words. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal to me,
~patty~
Comment from royowen
Seven syllables per line suit this style better than eight believe it or not. But I love reading about the Lord, it gives encouragement to those who struggle openly with testimony. So I applaud you for this slightly difficult patty. Well done, great progression, even meter, abcb rhyming, great language, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Seven syllables per line suit this style better than eight believe it or not. But I love reading about the Lord, it gives encouragement to those who struggle openly with testimony. So I applaud you for this slightly difficult patty. Well done, great progression, even meter, abcb rhyming, great language, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Hi Roy; thank you for reading and reviewing. Your words mean a great deal and I appreciate the warm review.
~patty~
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Most welcome
Comment from pbomar1115
The message of love is always peaceful to on lookers. No one makes any effort to rid the world of it because we experience its affect. So, we see it and we don't. But we all live longer because of it. Thanks for the reminder to always remember that if we don't have any thing, we have love.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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The message of love is always peaceful to on lookers. No one makes any effort to rid the world of it because we experience its affect. So, we see it and we don't. But we all live longer because of it. Thanks for the reminder to always remember that if we don't have any thing, we have love.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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thank you for your continued reading and reviewing of my work. I'm glad you enjoyed the message of this poem,
~patty~
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You're welcome.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! This is a beautiful poem - enhanced by the artwork. The author's words are clear, heart felt and thought provoking. The artwork is just beautiful and compliments both the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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Excellent Poem! This is a beautiful poem - enhanced by the artwork. The author's words are clear, heart felt and thought provoking. The artwork is just beautiful and compliments both the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A fantastic spiritual poem with such a lovely message within, flows beautifully with some brilliant lines throughout.
Particularly enjoyed the last stanza...very poignant
Mitchell
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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A fantastic spiritual poem with such a lovely message within, flows beautifully with some brilliant lines throughout.
Particularly enjoyed the last stanza...very poignant
Mitchell
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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Hi Mitchell; I'm very glad you enjoyed this poem. It was so inspired that it came to me in a single thought. Sometimes it works like that, and other times, I stare at the screen for hours,
~patty~
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
wow my friend what a great poem I see why
it is recognized your words realy touched my heart
I love spititual poetry and you sure know how to write it
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wow my friend what a great poem I see why
it is recognized your words realy touched my heart
I love spititual poetry and you sure know how to write it
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for your lovely review. I do my best with His help, or course,
~patty~
