Act of Endurance
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Comment from Harry Smith
Excellent painting selection for an excellently well written poem that is filled with lots and lots of imagery. The reader enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Excellent painting selection for an excellently well written poem that is filled with lots and lots of imagery. The reader enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Glad aspects of this write was found appealing. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting words.
Comment from SeanFox16
Hi Tpac. Thank you for sharing this thought provoking piece of poetry. The image you chose for it reminded me of the famous Robert Frost poem "The Path Not Taken", which just happens to be my favourite poem ever. This might not be quite as good as that, but nonetheless, it's a great piece of writing. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Hi Tpac. Thank you for sharing this thought provoking piece of poetry. The image you chose for it reminded me of the famous Robert Frost poem "The Path Not Taken", which just happens to be my favourite poem ever. This might not be quite as good as that, but nonetheless, it's a great piece of writing. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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A wonderful statement to make, filled me with hopes at least I'm moving in the right direction. Maybe, what I'm writing is poetry: not accurate but pleasing in intentions. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed remarks.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
You are an excellent Poet. You a have a style that I have never seen before. It, of course, is your own style and deep. Your style speaks to the heart and your poetry whispers a quiet sorrow yet strength from raw experience or feelings from resentment of possibly realities known or witnessed. You are a unique Poet. I like it.
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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You are an excellent Poet. You a have a style that I have never seen before. It, of course, is your own style and deep. Your style speaks to the heart and your poetry whispers a quiet sorrow yet strength from raw experience or feelings from resentment of possibly realities known or witnessed. You are a unique Poet. I like it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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I like your end statement. I'm glad aspects of this write were found pleasing. As for being a poet, I'm striving to learn this special talent. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed remarks.
