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The Fireworks Stand

From Life to Death

6 total reviews 
Comment from wilkswrites
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Very nice story. Losing mom is a stinger. Lost mine 4 years ago, very weird time watching a loved one transition. IT is clear to see what is happening in your story. Thank you for sharing and cona our win.

 Comment Written 09-May-2017


reply by the author on 09-May-2017
    Thank you , we learned so much at that fireworks stand. I so appreciate your words
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
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A very nice story about bringing a family together. It often helps to get away from all of the distractions of the world together. It also helps to be working together and relying on each other. I'm glad for you that you set up your fireworks stand.

 Comment Written 08-May-2017


reply by the author on 08-May-2017
    Thank you so much. It was a great learning experience
Comment from kathleenspalding
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What a sweet and bittersweet story. Very believable with a good, strong main character. I didn't see anything that needed to be corrected. Thank you for writing and sharing, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
    thank you so much. It was a wonderful time for our family to grow.
reply by kathleenspalding on 26-Apr-2017
    You're welcome. True story? Good on ya!
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
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The best part of your inspiring life is we won't feel it a burden when we have people around us to stand by and share our happiness and sad times as well. A great narration with a pleasing narration. A good entry to the content. Have a great day. Namaskaram.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
    So true lots of love in this one, and lots of reality. Life may not be perfect but what a journey. By the way Nik, the wrestler is now a famous UFc fighter on tv who has been ranked as high as seventh in the world. Mandy is a Lawyer. Matthew just won technician of the year for BMW and they are sending him to school to become a Master Mechanic. Two days from now I am flying to florida to meet niks new daughter, my four month old grand daughter. Life is wonderful.
reply by Vijay Kumar V on 24-Apr-2017
    That's really great, I'm happy to meet such good people. Wish you and your family good health and love. Namaskaram
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing your entry in the 'time of my life' contest. You have shown us a great deal of familial dealings throughout the years. It does sound like the firework stand made yours a stronger family. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
    Thank you Patty, It really did. All of the children are happy and successful. My oldest son Nik fight on Tv in UFC and has been ranked as high as seventh in the world. Mandy is a Lawyer and Matthew continues to excel in mechanics. What a wonderful world. And to tomorrow I am flying to florida to meet Nik's daughter , my four month old grand daughter for the first time.
reply by Mustang Patty on 24-Apr-2017
    Awww. Have fun on vacation and enjoy your new grandbaby. I appreciate you sharing how your kids are doing, ~p~
Comment from SeanFox16
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Hi Judy. I can only imagine the excitement of working at a fireworks stand coming up to Christmas and around the 4th of July. It sounds like ye had a lot of fun during the times ye spent there. I love the way you intersperse happy and sad times in this wonderful, poignant tale of yore. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
    Thank you Sean. It was a wonderful time and a learning time. Thank you for reading and responding.

    Judy