My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Three Crosses"a collection of my poetry
37 total reviews
Comment from Bill O'Bier
While I was reading this lovely poem. I suddenly remembered that my Dad would always trace the sign of the cross on our foreheads before he kissed brothers and me goodnight. Thanks for bringing that memory back for me.
All the best...
Bill~
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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While I was reading this lovely poem. I suddenly remembered that my Dad would always trace the sign of the cross on our foreheads before he kissed brothers and me goodnight. Thanks for bringing that memory back for me.
All the best...
Bill~
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hi Bill; my great grandmother used to do that, too. She had a small statue with holy water in it, and she would bless all of us when we left after a visit - I'm glad you recovered your memory, and I'm happy I have mine,
~patty~
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nicely constructed. I like how you have made a cross for each of the three that were crucified and told the story about them. I like your profile photo. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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This is very nicely constructed. I like how you have made a cross for each of the three that were crucified and told the story about them. I like your profile photo. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hi Marilyn; thank you for the compliments! I was inspired to write this poem when I came across the form. I conceived of the idea, and then just had to find the right words to build the crosses.
~patty~
Comment from estory
I think you did a great job in this format, and the format really suited the subject matter. You have these short, hammering lines, a rigid, tightly nailed construction, and the images stand in stark relief to each other. I think it really captures a sense of the three souls on those three crosses, One bitter, one giving himself away for all of us, and one who reaches for grace and recieives it. nice one estory
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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I think you did a great job in this format, and the format really suited the subject matter. You have these short, hammering lines, a rigid, tightly nailed construction, and the images stand in stark relief to each other. I think it really captures a sense of the three souls on those three crosses, One bitter, one giving himself away for all of us, and one who reaches for grace and recieives it. nice one estory
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hi estory; thank you so much for this concise and thoughtful review. This was an inspired write and I enjoyed sharing it,
~patty~
Comment from Nan Beeson
Dear Patty....
Your poem abou Jesus Christ being crucified on the cross between the two theives is a heartbreaking story and to be forever remembered.
He shed his precious blood to pay for our sins, and I for one, am forever grateful and reason for living.
Thank you for keeping the story in remembrance.....
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Dear Patty....
Your poem abou Jesus Christ being crucified on the cross between the two theives is a heartbreaking story and to be forever remembered.
He shed his precious blood to pay for our sins, and I for one, am forever grateful and reason for living.
Thank you for keeping the story in remembrance.....
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hi Nan; thank you so much for your kind words. I think His act of complete sacrifice needs to be told over and over. I know I try to keep it at the forefront of my thoughts,
~patty~
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I so agree wth you, Patty....
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Patty, I love the Trinet Poetry for this faith write, it suits it so perfectly.
"he hung/ to die/ for hours/His hands/His feet
pierced for man's many wicked sins
He died, he rose, he won"
These are great words dear friend, very powerful write.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Patty, I love the Trinet Poetry for this faith write, it suits it so perfectly.
"he hung/ to die/ for hours/His hands/His feet
pierced for man's many wicked sins
He died, he rose, he won"
These are great words dear friend, very powerful write.
~Kerry
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hi Kerry; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I am glad you liked the piece. Your kind words of encouragement make my day,
~patty~
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Your very welcome, my dear.
Comment from Rlegel99
Very much like this poem. The visual form of the three crosses mirrors the subject matter. The artwork works well with this piece. Thank you for sharing this piece of poetry.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Very much like this poem. The visual form of the three crosses mirrors the subject matter. The artwork works well with this piece. Thank you for sharing this piece of poetry.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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thank you for the lovely review. This poem was a work of love for Him. I appreciate you following my work.
~patty~
The shiny six star rating is a wonderful treat!
Comment from JW
Thanks for sharing this poem, MustangPatty.
It makes one wonder how it all happened over 2000 years ago. But even more interesting is the fact that if Jesus lived today, he would still probably be put to death. JW
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for sharing this poem, MustangPatty.
It makes one wonder how it all happened over 2000 years ago. But even more interesting is the fact that if Jesus lived today, he would still probably be put to death. JW
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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thank you for the lovely review. This poem was a work of love for Him. I appreciate you following my work.
~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Trinet poem. Your crosses seem to be in good shape and the message is great an true. The thieves deserved to be hanged, but the one who asked Him to think of him when He is in Paradise, He took him with.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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A very well-written Trinet poem. Your crosses seem to be in good shape and the message is great an true. The thieves deserved to be hanged, but the one who asked Him to think of him when He is in Paradise, He took him with.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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thank you, Sandra, for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~
Comment from LIJ Red
I read that Roman and Jewish law did not carry the death penalty for theft, and the Empire reserved crucifixion for traitors, rebellious slaves, and repeat offenders, so the two thieves were hard cases...noncanonical books call them Gestas, the unrepentant one, and Dismas... I enjoy faith poems. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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I read that Roman and Jewish law did not carry the death penalty for theft, and the Empire reserved crucifixion for traitors, rebellious slaves, and repeat offenders, so the two thieves were hard cases...noncanonical books call them Gestas, the unrepentant one, and Dismas... I enjoy faith poems. Excellent work.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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thank you for reading, reviewing and sharing the bit of history with me. I wonder what Gestas and Dismas stole? Your review is appreciated,
~patty~
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your timely and symbolic, spiritual poem. It must have taken quite a while to find just the right words to retell the story in the perfect pattern. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for sharing your timely and symbolic, spiritual poem. It must have taken quite a while to find just the right words to retell the story in the perfect pattern. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hi Joan; thank you for your well wishes in the contest. I was so thankful to find this poetic form to honor Him. I'm glad you liked the poem.
~patty~
