My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Pretty Pups Make my Day"a collection of my poetry
91 total reviews
Comment from dovemarie
Dear patty, a sweet poem about your dogs. I like the way the typing is italicized. The Monchielle is new to me. Maybe I'll try it out. Dove
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Dear patty, a sweet poem about your dogs. I like the way the typing is italicized. The Monchielle is new to me. Maybe I'll try it out. Dove
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hi Dove; you should try the Monchielle. It was really a fun poetic form to work with. Thank you for stopping by to read and review,
~patty~
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
'pretty pups make my day
fuzzy toes and tummy
the proud, the brave, the few,
navigate toys and such
doggy messes, oh pew
Pretty pups make my day
Shining eyes smile at me
they plot, they plan their ruse,
a quick dastardly trick
thank God, they don't eat shoes...
I ADORED this Patty, lighthearted and well crafted. virtual six for well written cuteness :) Love Meia x (reminds me of my pup Buffy as a pup :)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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'pretty pups make my day
fuzzy toes and tummy
the proud, the brave, the few,
navigate toys and such
doggy messes, oh pew
Pretty pups make my day
Shining eyes smile at me
they plot, they plan their ruse,
a quick dastardly trick
thank God, they don't eat shoes...
I ADORED this Patty, lighthearted and well crafted. virtual six for well written cuteness :) Love Meia x (reminds me of my pup Buffy as a pup :)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Oh Meia; I love it when you weigh in on my writing! Thank you for the virtual six. It was a challenge to write this and meet all the requirements of the poetic form; but it also made it fun.
~patty~
Comment from sunnilicious
Adorable photograph of your pet puppies. They are pretty. The repeat line work the poem together nicely. Good action and description words utilized. Good way to ode them. Nice work.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Adorable photograph of your pet puppies. They are pretty. The repeat line work the poem together nicely. Good action and description words utilized. Good way to ode them. Nice work.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I love writing about my fuzzy little boys!
~patty~
Comment from Nan Beeson
Good morning, Patty, for your author's notes. I read them before your poem and found it to be delightful in all aspects, beginning with the doggies, who like my Yorky, is in dire need of a haircut, also.. LOL!
It was such a fun read, and I loved your ending, that you were so grateful they did not eat eat shoes! LOL!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Good morning, Patty, for your author's notes. I read them before your poem and found it to be delightful in all aspects, beginning with the doggies, who like my Yorky, is in dire need of a haircut, also.. LOL!
It was such a fun read, and I loved your ending, that you were so grateful they did not eat eat shoes! LOL!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hi Nan; thank you so much for your warm review of this poem about my furry boys. I'm sure your Yorky has lots of tails in him/her.
~patty~
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You are welcome, and indeed he does, LOL!
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is a cute poem, Patty. It's one that every dog owner can relate well to. Cute pic of the pups. My last dog, Daisy, was a Bichon Frise ... so cute and cuddly!
This is the first time that I have seen this form. You did a great job on your Monchielle poem. Thanks for your author notes detailing it. "Fuzzy toes and tummy" is my favorite line. I loved to rub my Daisy's tummy. :)
Connie
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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This is a cute poem, Patty. It's one that every dog owner can relate well to. Cute pic of the pups. My last dog, Daisy, was a Bichon Frise ... so cute and cuddly!
This is the first time that I have seen this form. You did a great job on your Monchielle poem. Thanks for your author notes detailing it. "Fuzzy toes and tummy" is my favorite line. I loved to rub my Daisy's tummy. :)
Connie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hi; I'm so happy you liked this little poem about my fuzzy boys. I'm sure you must miss your Daisy; I'm not sure what I will do when the boys time on earth is finished.
Thank you for your time to read and review,
~patty~
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like a lot of fun in your house with your pups about, never a dull moment it seems! I love it when they scamper, because then they are exhausted and sleep in their baskets! A joyous uplifting write Patty, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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It sounds like a lot of fun in your house with your pups about, never a dull moment it seems! I love it when they scamper, because then they are exhausted and sleep in their baskets! A joyous uplifting write Patty, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hi Dolly; I'm happy you were able to see the whimsy in this poem. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful review,
~patty~
Comment from His Grayness
I really loved this work as I am a genuine, first edition "PUPPY LOVER". Who must apologize for being out of the sixth star I would certainly offer for this lovely work, full of delight. It is Very well packaged with photo and excellent writing. I thank the author for a truly delightful work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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I really loved this work as I am a genuine, first edition "PUPPY LOVER". Who must apologize for being out of the sixth star I would certainly offer for this lovely work, full of delight. It is Very well packaged with photo and excellent writing. I thank the author for a truly delightful work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hi His Grayness; I will take a virtual six any day - especially this late in the week! I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. My puppies always seem to deliver 'delight.' Thank you for kind and thoughtful review,
~patty~
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My joy indeed! Thanks again! Vance
Comment from c_lucas
Puppies are fun to watch and to play with. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Puppies are fun to watch and to play with. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by. Your review was kind and thoughtful.
~patty~
Comment from MaggieF
Love the picture, so cute. They sound like fun pups. The poem flows well with good rhyming scheme and subtle alliteration. My thee dogs are running about outside at thee moment. I loved 'thank God they don't eat shoes' Enjoyed. MaggieF
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Love the picture, so cute. They sound like fun pups. The poem flows well with good rhyming scheme and subtle alliteration. My thee dogs are running about outside at thee moment. I loved 'thank God they don't eat shoes' Enjoyed. MaggieF
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hi Maggie; thank you so much for your warm review of this piece. The boys were really happy that I finally wrote something for them. (They forget that I posted a poem about them at the beginning of the week!)
~patty~
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
this is such a light-hearted, fun poem,
with a lovely sing-song rhythm to it ...
brightening my day - I love the picture
of your dogs. I lost my little Cairn
terrier some time ago, but still miss
her so much.
Margaret
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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this is such a light-hearted, fun poem,
with a lovely sing-song rhythm to it ...
brightening my day - I love the picture
of your dogs. I lost my little Cairn
terrier some time ago, but still miss
her so much.
Margaret
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hi Margaret; I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, but sad that it made you miss your dog. The boys are a great source of joy and comfort to me. They are also great inspiration. Thank you for your time to read and review.
~patty~
