Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Monchielle poem about your puppies that make your day fun and worthwhile. They are lively and full of play. It is good they don't like to eat shoes.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Sweeeet! These pretty pups are adorable.
A lovely Monchielle poetry form to tell how they make your day. A perfect repeating line.

Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and well wording descriptive Monchielle poem you have penned. I love the picture of the sweet pups! love, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Hehe I really like this. This poem is special to me as WE own a shi tzu maltese about 12 years old now But when a pup managed to chew every bit of furniture we owned.
Thanks for sharing this great poem
dip

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

An excellent poem and read how lucky you are your pups don't eat shoes as most seem to enjoy that cute photo of them puts the picture in the mind of these pups going about their daily routine****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Glad they don't eat shoes! I like the meter of the poem and the repeated first line stays true as the poet affirms her love of these precious little pups despite their mischievous side.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

Comment from JW

Excellent

This was a very cute poem about pups. And it is definitely one I can relate to since I own two dogs who live inside.

Thanks for sharing this. It adds a smile to one's day. JW

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Very cute puppies do they know they are being exploited? I have two feral cats. I have a bumper sticker that says, My cat can beat up your dog.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~
your cats could definitely take my dogs - they're chicken!

Comment from Laurie Clayton

Excellent

Hello there,

This was an enjoyable read. You have certainly managed to capture all the cheek, saving graces and occasional pit falls of having playful pups around, good imagery and flow.

Glad they don't chew shoes!

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

I like the aabcb rhyme scheme of these stanzas the use repetition to discuss all the ways puppies can make your day. These sure a busy keeping you smile.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read about my 'pups,' Howie and Bernie. Though they are four and two years old respectively, they are very much my furry kids. They are a constant source of inspiration and the center of a lot of my writing.
~patty~

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Apr-2017

My pleasure. I have a dog too. But she is 15 years old so is not bouncy and active like she was when she was a puppy.

Keep writing

Joan