Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Patty,

I don't think I've ever seen a monchielle poem before. What an interesting form. Pretty pups are always fun to write about. Thank you for sharing all of the specifics of the form in your author's notes. I always appreciate learning new styles. You appear to have followed the specifications to a T. Great job!

Kim

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Hi Kim; thank you for your kind and warm review of my monchielle. I found the form through one of Sandra du Plessis's posts. It looked like fun, so I tried it,
~patty~

Comment from RobertaLee

Excellent

Boy girl! You certainly challenge yourself on the styles of poetry you accomplish. Love the topic (love, love, love my dog Hope) and certainly is a lively rendition of a day with our furry children.
Smiles

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I love to write about my dogs, and this poetic form just lent itself well to their nature,
~patty~

Comment from --Turtle.

Excellent

I'm not very good at poetic forms, but I read through this poem, it's light themed, the kind of read that fits with life and leisure. People can relate to pets and mischief, the joys and humor of interaction with furry parts of the family. The rhyming scheme was simple, and playful.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was a challenge to meet the requirements of the poetic form, but once I got going, it was really fun to do the 'puzzle' and get everything to fit.
~patty~

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Patty,

This is a "feel good" poem. I smiled from start to finish. You described these pretty pups so well -- their behavior, their love, their movement, their cuteness.

You are quite lucky that they don't eat your shoes.

Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review this poem about my dogs. They do have a good time, and tend to have me wrapped around their....uh, paws.
~patty~

Comment from doggymad

Excellent

Indeed these two are very pretty. I love the way your poem bounds along with all the energy of a playful puppy.

I do believe that dogs spend a lot of time planning their next crime.

Lovely write Patty

hugs
Freda

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Hi; I'm glad you enjoyed this little poem about Howie and Bernie. It was a fun poetic form to play with,
~patty~

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

A fine poem, Patty, and they look like they'd be a blast. If you're anything like me, pets are people, and I enjoy the heck out of them, and anybody who doesn't love animals is a zero as a person!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Yay!! You read one of my poems. Yes, I truly believe my pets are people in dog suits. The dog suits make them humble and loving. They are the best. Thank you for dropping by,
~patty~

reply by Mike Stevens on 22-Apr-2017

Sorry I haven't read your stuff earlier, but I tend to avoid reading a long time because my eyes don't play well together. Poems and stuff are okay, but it just slips my mind to read something!

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

totally understand. I just felt like giving you a bad time today - I can be mean like that,
~patty~

reply by Mike Stevens on 22-Apr-2017

No, I understand, I'm a bastard!

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

Living in a senior community where almost each household have dogs, I can imagine how pretty pups indeed make your day! A very enjoyable read with excellent rhyming scheme in simple down to earth vocabulary; thank you for sharing my friend.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comment about 'down to earth vocabulary.' I was taught to never use a five-dollar word when a dime one would do just fine,
~patty~

reply by ameen786 on 22-Apr-2017

Words of wisdom my friend.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

I always like to see, poems I refer to as , reality based.
A nice touch of life and live.
Nicely done.
Have a great day, Patty.
RGstar

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

thank you so much for the warm review. I appreciate your kind words, and I do try to keep my writing real,
~patty~

Comment from Dan-C

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem about the pretty puppies. I have three of them. And yes sometimes they make a mess I once came home to a gift of dog vomit on my pillow.
Thank you for sharing
Dan

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read my Monchielle poem with my dogs as the subject. This was a challenging poetic form to follow, but I'm very happy with the result - I'm glad you are, too.
~patty~

Comment from Lulube

Exceptional

Very energetic, lots of activity going on, shared through the great imagery you have provided for the reader. Great flow, fast reading, and great rhyming.
Funny thing is, I just wrote a poem on 2 dogs, brother and sister, that I met on a stroll yesterday. I am just going to post it but I needed another dollar and your poem is the first one I ran across to read. Great minds........

lulube

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read my Monchielle poem with my dogs as the subject. This was a challenging poetic form to follow, but I'm very happy with the result - I'm glad you are, too.
~patty~

reply by Lulube on 23-Apr-2017

welcome
finally posted mine on two dachshunds

lulube