Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

'Pretty Pups Make My Day' is a nice poem.
The third and fifth line in each stanza rhyme.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem. The puppies are so cute.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi Nicole; thank you for your warm and kind review. The boys are a constant source of inspiration and some of my best friends.
~patty~