Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your teacup poem, "Waiting for tea". All tour lines and syllables were correct. I just loved that beautiful cup.
Best of luck.
NMarybell1.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review this whimsical piece about a teacup. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

reply by marybell1 on 23-Apr-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is such an appropriate poem for the poetry format dear patty! nicely written and easy to follow. i think you have filled all the requirements for the poem.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review this whimsical piece about a teacup. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from Vijay Kumar V

Excellent

Wow, how beautiful, the pleasing words really sound pretty soothing to the mind, this early morning. You really spout my spirit to joy. Have a great day. Namaskaram

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review this whimsical piece about a teacup. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Waiting for tea" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

thank you so much for the very positive review. I had a great deal of fun composing this piece. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 20-Apr-2017

patty, you're more than welcome. It's a pleasure to read and review your work.

Kindest wishes, the Duchess

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Patty. What a gorgeous gift from your son. Photographed beautifully and a teacup form poem to be written about it is the perfect match. I like it. I must try one of these. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Marilyn; thank you so much for the read and review. I love this tea cup. He actually bought me a total of 3 different sets. He found them in an antique shop at the beach, and wanted to add them to my collection,
~patty~
try the teacup form - its fun!

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

'Waiting for Tea' is a nice read.
There's nothing like sipping tea from fine china.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem.
The author's notes are appreciated.
Thanks for sharing your Teacup.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Nicole; thank you for stopping by to read and review my teacup poem. This was a fun little write!
~patty~

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Patty, what a beautiful saucer. How nice of your son to send it to you. I think these teacup poems are fun! Excellent syllable count. You did a great job with this.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Mel; the picture is the inside of the teacup, and then the saucer underneath. They both DO have the same picture of the rose. I agree that these shape poems are a great deal of fun. On a whim, I wrote a teacup poem about a teacup!
~patty~

reply by MelB on 20-Apr-2017

It was very appropriate!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice teacup poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording about this really pretty teacup and saucer. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessing, Teri

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Teri; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Oh, I love teacup poems, so pretty. This is wonderful Patty, great job my friend.. I never did write one, I really should~~~I love it ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kerry~~~~

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Kerry; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 21-Apr-2017

Your welcome

Comment from Laurie Clayton

Excellent

Hello there,

I found your author notes very helpful in defining this form, as I had not come across it before.

Lovely imagery, light and refined, just like the act of making tea used to be ... before tea bags and one mug wonders!

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi Laurie; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~